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2024-10-03 07:43

Changing mc's destination is not only fooling him, but also readers. Bruce is just jumping through places with no reason to do anything - plotline is just dead after siege on his guild.

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It's been a while but, it's not always that the life of the MC is eventful all the time. There are times, when he does nothing, there's nothing going on, in the World. It's not as if, this is a Power Ranger fic, though a wrong example. It's not a Power Ranger Fic, where you get villains thrown at MCs every episode. I've included his eventful times in Yggdrasil, to when the player base of the Yggdrasil dropped. Which is why Momonga is depressed at the start of the story in LN. How the game changed after the drop in player base and how it has affected him. I've also included his interactions with the other gamers, though they are more focused in the end. After all, by then Bruce and World( who is kind of like Manas) had done everything they wished or could do, in preparation for the New World. As for his destination, it was already mentioned in the beginning. Of how he could get thrown in some other universe, rather than going to New World, if he were to break the canon/story, deviating it by a lot. And believe me, after everything he has done in the game, he was spared and got off, very easily. Mc is struggling to get back to New World, he is doing everything he can. And so he has, before the start of the current volume. Moreover, I had announced it in the comment section and in AN at the end of the chapter, before the end of Yggdrasil Arc. Anyway, thank you, for your review. I'll keep this in mind while continuing this fic.

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