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Poet_Legion
Poet_LegionLv157mth
2024-07-03 00:20

The whole prison sequence in the war with the monsters. Just the first riff lasts way too long for it to be. Enjoyable to read, especially with the writing style. At the beginning of the book, it feels very soulless, especially with the abundance of fluffed chapters. There are so many chapters I read through. That just are pointless towards the story.There were a couple times that I skipped a few and it made no difference. Honestly, if the entire war arc with the monsters only lasted 30 chapters.What have been pretty good?But looks like it lasts about 60 or 70 and definitely over stays.It's welcome

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

RighteousFilth
3.7
764 Chs

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Poet_Legion
Poet_LegionLv15

I raped the chapter 223 and honestly.The story is worse and worse.It's been over a 100 chapters since our main characters made any progress in power and while that's not bad, he's also made no progress in his personality as a character or even the world making any progress towards a world goal.If you can say that there is one in the story because honestly there isn't. From the novel, starting a bit Rocky to being a bit slow. When it came to the rift Ark, it got so much worse after he exited the rift. Cause you think once he got back with humans? It would at least be kind of cool. Maybe you'd have to kill a couple people. Maybe they have to come to terms with that. Maybe you'd have to come to terms with being a monster and what not? But instead we have our main character being shown in one scene. As a complete homocidal, maniac wants to kill his own teacher because she was. Trying to see if he was okay. And he didn't want her to find out his power to the next second. Being a complete West not being able to talk up to anybody about anything that's happening to. Even the next second are main character. Literally drowning and madness while fighting a pretty interesting way. Honestly, it was really nice to read that little section with the monster in the mansion, but it was completely ruined because right after. All this scenery was depicted with our main character.Being mentally insane and unstable to him trying to be the committee.Release 10 chapters later and just being a very awkward.B****** around everything and it's not even in a good way either.It's just so forced.Every interaction between the main character in raven is so forced that it's not even funny

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A_N_O_N_Y_M
A_N_O_N_Y_MLv3

could you review my book. I totally agree to what you say about this. My book: X-season 1

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PhoenixYT
PhoenixYTLv3

Can't argue with that, dropped it once they went on their little adventure since it got tiring

Poet_Legion:I raped the chapter 223 and honestly.The story is worse and worse.It's been over a 100 chapters since our main characters made any progress in power and while that's not bad, he's also made no progress in his personality as a character or even the world making any progress towards a world goal.If you can say that there is one in the story because honestly there isn't. From the novel, starting a bit Rocky to being a bit slow. When it came to the rift Ark, it got so much worse after he exited the rift. Cause you think once he got back with humans? It would at least be kind of cool. Maybe you'd have to kill a couple people. Maybe they have to come to terms with that. Maybe you'd have to come to terms with being a monster and what not? But instead we have our main character being shown in one scene. As a complete homocidal, maniac wants to kill his own teacher because she was. Trying to see if he was okay. And he didn't want her to find out his power to the next second. Being a complete West not being able to talk up to anybody about anything that's happening to. Even the next second are main character. Literally drowning and madness while fighting a pretty interesting way. Honestly, it was really nice to read that little section with the monster in the mansion, but it was completely ruined because right after. All this scenery was depicted with our main character.Being mentally insane and unstable to him trying to be the committee.Release 10 chapters later and just being a very awkward.B****** around everything and it's not even in a good way either.It's just so forced.Every interaction between the main character in raven is so forced that it's not even funny
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RighteousFilth
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Author's divine review. After a hundred chapters. I have decided to drop a honest review of my work. Okay, for the first hundred chapters we focus on Northern and his sufferings. Even though this is a book about an overpowered character, my MC is not suddenly strong from the beginning. We see how this happens, how he survives in a realm of suffering and comes out different and strong. So, yes if you are expecting an overpowered character from the beginning this is not it. But I do promise you that following Northern would be a delightful experience. Next we have the characters. The characters are made to be so realistic, you'll meet dumb characters, you'll meet brilliant characters, some of them you will love some of them you will hate, but you'll find yourself unable to just quit the story... there's so much information, so much to say because Ul'Tra-el is just a magnificent world full of wonders, even I have not explored it all. I implore you to dive into this world with me. I'd love to take Northern's journey to the very end with you guys, till he becomes the pinnacle of not just one world but all worlds, till he marries, gives birth, grows old and die. I'm determined to see this to the end, so come with me. Thank you.

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HADE_Thoppil
HADE_ThoppilLv4

why is the author using complex sentences when there are simpler options ❓ first of all, writing style while explaining is weird which becomes harder with the author's choice of words. Author does not know how to end a topic. He or she just moves on with the next topic. i really don't like this way of writing

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BoNe_of_mY_SwORd
BoNe_of_mY_SwORdLv14

the thing with novels is if u want people to spend money on them , u need to get them hooked or at least curious enough to read past the free chapters . this one didn't manage to do that with me . the writing could be much better. the constantly shifting povs in the beginning, weird info dumps and complex classifications just makes it much harder to read . also i understand if his parents didn't want to teach him how to fight so that he could get a better technique later but why didn't they teach him anything? nothing about rifts or even how to use a monster core . and he barely uses his system. it's supposed to be his power why not use it ?

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fukkinchicken
fukkinchickenLv11

I love everything about this novel and I hope this gets enough exposure 'cuz It's just that great. Everything is well thought of; The Story, The Character Development, The Fights, The World Building, and The Mystery EVERYTHING! I approve, Author-san and I hope you don't butcher this 'cuz I really really love it.

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dracula6969
dracula6969Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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RedPandaK
RedPandaKLv14

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Cultured_Daoist69
Cultured_Daoist69Lv13

Grats fellow filthy brother on WPC🐐🐐🐐 THE GOATTT!🐐🐐

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bigmadtoe
bigmadtoeLv4

bloated. so many words to convey so less. it's better than most of the trash here. It keeps going on and on and the story barely moves forward. Reading this feels like a chore

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Faeth_
Faeth_Lv12

character progress is too slow it kill the mood

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Zerobeast
ZerobeastLv13

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