Item: I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
Rating: 2.4
Author: BoNe_of_mY_SwORd

BoNe_of_mY_SwORdLv149mth

2024-05-01 22:05

the thing with novels is if u want people to spend money on them , u need to get them hooked or at least curious enough to read past the free chapters . this one didn't manage to do that with me . the writing could be much better. the constantly shifting povs in the beginning, weird info dumps and complex classifications just makes it much harder to read . also i understand if his parents didn't want to teach him how to fight so that he could get a better technique later but why didn't they teach him anything? nothing about rifts or even how to use a monster core . and he barely uses his system. it's supposed to be his power why not use it ?

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

RighteousFilth

3.7

779 Chs

Liked by 31 people

Replies7

RighteousFilthAuthor

I could swear I didn't shift POVs in the beginning, lol, maybe I'm not that experienced yet. I'm sincerely sorry you were not gripped by the story and found it to be irritating but I also think it's a matter of preference, I wish I could do more to make you more interested though

9mth

Adn_noorLv13

Author you should listen its not about preference its just common sense and logic is missing in the story it annoys people

RighteousFilth:I could swear I didn't shift POVs in the beginning, lol, maybe I'm not that experienced yet. I'm sincerely sorry you were not gripped by the story and found it to be irritating but I also think it's a matter of preference, I wish I could do more to make you more interested though

7mth

RighteousFilthAuthor

I actually do welcome the criticism, and I have woven further plots minding my mistakes. I'm not trying to give an excuse for my incompetence, but I am merely human, also a newbie author, but I promise to do better, and you will see evidences in my work

Adn_noor:Author you should listen its not about preference its just common sense and logic is missing in the story it annoys people

7mth

lonelydeathLv3

Can I ask you how you got contracted, I've been sent contract applications but I don't really know how to fill the form, any help.... please.

RighteousFilth:I actually do welcome the criticism, and I have woven further plots minding my mistakes. I'm not trying to give an excuse for my incompetence, but I am merely human, also a newbie author, but I promise to do better, and you will see evidences in my work

6mth

RighteousFilthAuthor

message me on Discord server. It's on the synopsis

lonelydeath:Can I ask you how you got contracted, I've been sent contract applications but I don't really know how to fill the form, any help.... please.

6mth

lonelydeathLv3

Which channel can I message you on, I'm seeing different types, #general..... #chat 2 etc

RighteousFilth:message me on Discord server. It's on the synopsis

6mth

RighteousFilthAuthor

just tag me, I'll respond to you

lonelydeath:Which channel can I message you on, I'm seeing different types, #general..... #chat 2 etc

6mth

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