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Dany_K_9260
Dany_K_9260Lv49mth
2024-06-30 14:01

Started off decent. Had a lil bit too close of a semblance to shadow slave but eh. Went down hill when author started padding chapter with fancy words and dragging things for chapters. MC showed no, to negative development of growth. Keeps saying he’ll try and author claims he’s trying to make mc realistic -_- maybe to you bud but some of us do what we say, especially if you consider MC is a reincarnator and should be mentally mature(cuz he was an adult in a modern world vs the new world) he shouldn’t need 150+ chapters just to get off his sorry butt. I tried, I really did. Authors writing isn’t horrible I just think when he tries putting his thoughts to pen, it doesn’t come out right or sum. Maybe write a less brain intensive novel like Blood Warlock, that did good for a while without all that extra jargon and ultra realistic behaviors

I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

RighteousFilth
3.7
901 Chs

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RighteousFilth
RighteousFilthAuthor

I'm sorry, I really am. But these mistakes, I do note and actively doing something about them, I even have an editor now that's helping me rework things from the beginning, that's why comments from earlier chapters disappear and while I do promise that things actually did get better and are worth it in the recent chapters, I can't force you to continue but it'd be great if you can catch and say if your opinion still remains the same.

9mth
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RighteousFilth
RighteousFilthAuthor

Thank you for the review

9mth
shanor
shanorLv5

Hi, when will you complete editing of earlier chapters?

RighteousFilth:I'm sorry, I really am. But these mistakes, I do note and actively doing something about them, I even have an editor now that's helping me rework things from the beginning, that's why comments from earlier chapters disappear and while I do promise that things actually did get better and are worth it in the recent chapters, I can't force you to continue but it'd be great if you can catch and say if your opinion still remains the same.
9mth
RighteousFilth
RighteousFilthAuthor

I have started if you noticed, but my editor is currently having exams, so it's on a pause.

shanor:Hi, when will you complete editing of earlier chapters?
9mth
DriftingMaze
DriftingMazeLv13

Yeah The MC is so freaking annoying...He doesn't even use his power properly

1mth
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RighteousFilth
RighteousFilthAuthor

Author's divine review. After a hundred chapters. I have decided to drop a honest review of my work. Okay, for the first hundred chapters we focus on Northern and his sufferings. Even though this is a book about an overpowered character, my MC is not suddenly strong from the beginning. We see how this happens, how he survives in a realm of suffering and comes out different and strong. So, yes if you are expecting an overpowered character from the beginning this is not it. But I do promise you that following Northern would be a delightful experience. Next we have the characters. The characters are made to be so realistic, you'll meet dumb characters, you'll meet brilliant characters, some of them you will love some of them you will hate, but you'll find yourself unable to just quit the story... there's so much information, so much to say because Ul'Tra-el is just a magnificent world full of wonders, even I have not explored it all. I implore you to dive into this world with me. I'd love to take Northern's journey to the very end with you guys, till he becomes the pinnacle of not just one world but all worlds, till he marries, gives birth, grows old and die. I'm determined to see this to the end, so come with me. Thank you.

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HADE_Thoppil
HADE_ThoppilLv11

why is the author using complex sentences when there are simpler options ❓ first of all, writing style while explaining is weird which becomes harder with the author's choice of words. Author does not know how to end a topic. He or she just moves on with the next topic. i really don't like this way of writing

1yr
BoNe_of_mY_SwORd
BoNe_of_mY_SwORdLv14

the thing with novels is if u want people to spend money on them , u need to get them hooked or at least curious enough to read past the free chapters . this one didn't manage to do that with me . the writing could be much better. the constantly shifting povs in the beginning, weird info dumps and complex classifications just makes it much harder to read . also i understand if his parents didn't want to teach him how to fight so that he could get a better technique later but why didn't they teach him anything? nothing about rifts or even how to use a monster core . and he barely uses his system. it's supposed to be his power why not use it ?

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fukkinchicken
fukkinchickenLv11

I love everything about this novel and I hope this gets enough exposure 'cuz It's just that great. Everything is well thought of; The Story, The Character Development, The Fights, The World Building, and The Mystery EVERYTHING! I approve, Author-san and I hope you don't butcher this 'cuz I really really love it.

1yr
RedPandaK
RedPandaKLv14

Reveal spoiler

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dracula6969
dracula6969Lv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Zerobeast
ZerobeastLv13

Reveal spoiler

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bigmadtoe
bigmadtoeLv4

bloated. so many words to convey so less. it's better than most of the trash here. It keeps going on and on and the story barely moves forward. Reading this feels like a chore

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Cultured_Daoist69
Cultured_Daoist69Lv13

Grats fellow filthy brother on WPC🐐🐐🐐 THE GOATTT!🐐🐐

1yr
Faeth_
Faeth_Lv12

character progress is too slow it kill the mood

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