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Dany_K_9260Lv47mth
2024-06-30 06:01

Started off decent. Had a lil bit too close of a semblance to shadow slave but eh. Went down hill when author started padding chapter with fancy words and dragging things for chapters. MC showed no, to negative development of growth. Keeps saying he’ll try and author claims he’s trying to make mc realistic -_- maybe to you bud but some of us do what we say, especially if you consider MC is a reincarnator and should be mentally mature(cuz he was an adult in a modern world vs the new world) he shouldn’t need 150+ chapters just to get off his sorry butt. I tried, I really did. Authors writing isn’t horrible I just think when he tries putting his thoughts to pen, it doesn’t come out right or sum. Maybe write a less brain intensive novel like Blood Warlock, that did good for a while without all that extra jargon and ultra realistic behaviors

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RighteousFilthAuthor

I'm sorry, I really am. But these mistakes, I do note and actively doing something about them, I even have an editor now that's helping me rework things from the beginning, that's why comments from earlier chapters disappear and while I do promise that things actually did get better and are worth it in the recent chapters, I can't force you to continue but it'd be great if you can catch and say if your opinion still remains the same.

RighteousFilthAuthor

Thank you for the review

shanorLv5

Hi, when will you complete editing of earlier chapters?

RighteousFilth:I'm sorry, I really am. But these mistakes, I do note and actively doing something about them, I even have an editor now that's helping me rework things from the beginning, that's why comments from earlier chapters disappear and while I do promise that things actually did get better and are worth it in the recent chapters, I can't force you to continue but it'd be great if you can catch and say if your opinion still remains the same.
RighteousFilthAuthor

I have started if you noticed, but my editor is currently having exams, so it's on a pause.

shanor:Hi, when will you complete editing of earlier chapters?
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