Could you complete the fanfic for us? The amount of fanfic that authors make without finishing is getting boring.......................................

The typical DxD novel with no real goal for the Mc so he ends up trying to get the most power possible within his childhood years. Harem antics that are beyond boring; since the author's use of diction with his description and dialogue is incredibly mundane. I think he has 5 women by this point and I couldn't care less about them since he only speaks to them when he requires something they have (except his mother I guess...). Updates are the only real positive to this book as everything else is mediocre at best. Buuuut, this is Webnovel- I don't exactly expect anything of substantial thought.

Voilà! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation stands vivified, and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin van-guarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition. The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous. Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it is my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.

The dialogue is pretty horrendous. A lot of it is just useless filler with no depth to it. The MC is a bit of a weirdo, but that's more the writers poor taste than anything. The dialogue is incredibly unrealistic, conversations especially. Yes, it's a fantasy world, but seriously? The conversations look like a child wrote them. The prose is awful. Each line adds nothing to the overall narrative, so much so you could skip the first 10 chapters and would of missed nothing of importance. I genuinely can't be bothered to give a more In depth review, the fanfic isn't worth anymore than what I've wrote.

I say, it's goes in a weird category for me. I mean, yeah it's definitely more or less typical dxd fanfic. But mc seems to be more intrested in guys then girls. He have more "brothers" then harem members. You think it's should be fine, but he literally have more interactions with DUDES then with his own womens. You could think of it, whatever way you want. Like from ancient greeks(I'm not talking about geh unreal greece, that people would present nowadays, no the geh wasn't that prominent as people like to present. It's just a screechs from political involved people) where womens was lesser beings, those can't be true comrades for mc - which is kinda based. Or he is literally latent geh. I think it's second option...

I want to start with saying that I've been a fan of your wyvern fic and want to know when you will continue it. It was one of the best Dxd fic for me. As for this fic, the start was good but it went downhill after the bael heir plot at least for me. The harem is too big and for me it didn't work out too many OCs and the harem members character were a bit off though the romance part was not bad but not good either. But the main thing that I didn't like was the power concept of MC. Despite having power of gravity from demon lord Wilbert from testement sister new devil which is equal or stronger than power of destruction it was nearly invisible throughout the fic apart from the start where he used it to train. Soul magic, necromancy , mage, knight alchemist blacksmith etc. you have put a lot of eggs in one basket and instead of harmony it all looks chaotic . Summary: For the author, you have a lot of ambitions you should have taken one step at time for all those professions and even that harem to work out not just take the shortcut called timeskip overall the concept of the fic was good but the execution was poor.

to be honest, it is getting boring, harem arch are same for all novels, it feels too early for love interest, and overall the story hasn't progress outside of Devil world with it being kind of fast yet slow progress of the content within the story, and the lack of action from mc puts me at a lost of interest to the novel.

Do you have a patreon

this is good, but the writing quality is bad. Its not about the gramar and typo, its about the choice of words. Also the dialogue is kinda weird. There is also no depth in the story.