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Slow down and think about what you just wrote, you are proving me correct…

>danzo is a guaranteed threat to the powerless uchiha remnants. mc cant guard everybody 24/7 >danzo triggers the Reverse 4 Symbols seal, a suicide technique that attracts and seals the surroundings I don’t even know what to say dude. I thought you were rage baiting, but this book is actually above your reading level… if you are just a kid then I apologize for the insults

It’s incredibly silly to let the biggest and most dangerous enemy live. He even lets him get patched up and regroup with his allies. All that just so he can attempt a cringe face slapping scene 5 chapters later only to fumble the revenge and accomplish nothing. Like, I’m sorry. I know everyone has their own preferences and I shouldn’t judge you, but if you can actually enjoy this you are just genuinely unintelligent. For your sake, I hope you are young and can grow out of it as you experience the countless better books and fanfic in this world.

He won the battle back in chap 5 and stalled for 4 entire chapters trying to act all lofty and righteous after his family just got slaughtered, as if the village will suddenly change their mind and realize genocide is bad if he scolds them calmly. It’s whiney and brainless, it makes no sense logically, emotionally or politically and it is unsatisfying as a reader. I’m actually mad you got me to look at this again, this trash is so irritating

It's called an AU fanfic or alternate universe. Basically canon is just used as a framework for the story, characters might be different ages or might be alive when they should be dead etc. It's pretty common for crossover type stories. As for the amount of swings, it’s likely a translation error. Not trying to hate on your review, these are just some things you will get used to with books like this.

This is really interesting so far. Author has the brainpower to write schemes and the translator did well

That’s basically what I’m thinking too. My guess is that his native language shows dialogue differently so he used the chatbot to edit it to English style. This is honestly one of the rare situations where the story would straight up improve if he just ran the whole thing through for editing, but it feels odd to suggest that after he got weird in the comments and I called him a liar lmao

Sorry you are wrong, it’s just that the author is using it sporadically. The author has ok English but he’s not at the level where using old fashioned words like “supplant” or “gruffed” is believable. There are other tells as well in the dialogue. For example, when the mc meets the warden it forgets about whether the character is cruel or someone stern but fair. Also the odd verb variety is another good hint to look for

No you are just dumb, those aren’t factors. You were lazy again and did no research. If you had actually looked up examples you would have been able to call me out because I was mistaken about Harry Potter which is also high fantasy.

You are a hero