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Facundo_Juarez
Facundo_JuarezLv11yr
2023-12-18 15:18

The story was good, it's a shame it's a pathetic harem between 12 and 13 year olds. It doesn't make any sense. ................................

The Strongest Dark Lord

Mysteryon
4.4
356 Chs

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Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

yeah the original version is like that, I'm doing what I can to delay relationships for some time but there's still a bit of flirting because well, I remember being that age and that was something completely normal to do back then...

1yr
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DRShikimori
DRShikimoriLv3

If the mc wasn't a reincarnated soul, that would be fine, however an adult hitting on children, very strange, the difficulty of a reincarnation fanfic in HP and that, an adult among children is simply strange

1yr
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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

TL i agree with this person. Its normal when we were young but MC is adult in a young body so it just feels creepy. Hope you can cut down more of these parts.

DRShikimori:If the mc wasn't a reincarnated soul, that would be fine, however an adult hitting on children, very strange, the difficulty of a reincarnation fanfic in HP and that, an adult among children is simply strange
1yr
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Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

...? with reincarnation... I don't even need to say it, the harem is already pathetic. now pedophile and new to me? Why is this still going on?

Mysteryon:yeah the original version is like that, I'm doing what I can to delay relationships for some time but there's still a bit of flirting because well, I remember being that age and that was something completely normal to do back then...
1yr
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Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

because webnovel is a cesspit of degenerates? For some reason I imagined you like this guy in the gif

Thiago_guedes:...? with reincarnation... I don't even need to say it, the harem is already pathetic. now pedophile and new to me? Why is this still going on?
1yr
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Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

and you are their "supplier"... and you have nothing to gain from it...

Mysteryon:because webnovel is a cesspit of degenerates? For some reason I imagined you like this guy in the gif
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1yr
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Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

Thiago_guedes:and you are their "supplier"... and you have nothing to gain from it...
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1yr
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holosagewolf32
holosagewolf32Lv15

is this harem? while reading it sounds like it yet you dont have the harem tag

Mysteryon:yeah the original version is like that, I'm doing what I can to delay relationships for some time but there's still a bit of flirting because well, I remember being that age and that was something completely normal to do back then...
1yr
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Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

The harem tag is there, I added it a long time ago. I'm working on chapters 210s already and for now the confirmed harem members are Hermione, Cho Chang, Ginny Weasley, Luna, Fleur. Astoria and Daphne Greengrass are still in maybe, while there hasn't been any interaction with any other female characters for now, but I'm just in the fourth year so there's still time.

holosagewolf32:is this harem? while reading it sounds like it yet you dont have the harem tag
1yr
10
holosagewolf32
holosagewolf32Lv15

When i view tags on the app harem doesn’t appear

Mysteryon:The harem tag is there, I added it a long time ago. I'm working on chapters 210s already and for now the confirmed harem members are Hermione, Cho Chang, Ginny Weasley, Luna, Fleur. Astoria and Daphne Greengrass are still in maybe, while there hasn't been any interaction with any other female characters for now, but I'm just in the fourth year so there's still time.
1yr
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Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

Just checked and you're right, I had done it a long time ago but apparently it didn't stick, now I did it again and triple checked that the app accepted the change 😅

holosagewolf32:When i view tags on the app harem doesn’t appear
1yr
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holosagewolf32
holosagewolf32Lv15

Thank you for fixing it.

Mysteryon:Just checked and you're right, I had done it a long time ago but apparently it didn't stick, now I did it again and triple checked that the app accepted the change 😅
1yr
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Clay_Champion
Clay_ChampionLv5

Hi, Thanks for the translation work. I wanted to ask a question: Will you be 'upping' the release rate once you have completed the translation upto 356 chapters? Or have you already done it but are keeping the same pace of 8/week?

Mysteryon:yeah the original version is like that, I'm doing what I can to delay relationships for some time but there's still a bit of flirting because well, I remember being that age and that was something completely normal to do back then...
11mth
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Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

I'm keeping the current pace until the end

Clay_Champion:Hi, Thanks for the translation work. I wanted to ask a question: Will you be 'upping' the release rate once you have completed the translation upto 356 chapters? Or have you already done it but are keeping the same pace of 8/week?
11mth
1
Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

Ahh the football team harem. Nah me out

Mysteryon:The harem tag is there, I added it a long time ago. I'm working on chapters 210s already and for now the confirmed harem members are Hermione, Cho Chang, Ginny Weasley, Luna, Fleur. Astoria and Daphne Greengrass are still in maybe, while there hasn't been any interaction with any other female characters for now, but I'm just in the fourth year so there's still time.
9mth
Usiel
UsielLv13

Thank you for the heads-up. Those 3 are the most hated characters to my taste. Especially granger and weaslett.

Mysteryon:The harem tag is there, I added it a long time ago. I'm working on chapters 210s already and for now the confirmed harem members are Hermione, Cho Chang, Ginny Weasley, Luna, Fleur. Astoria and Daphne Greengrass are still in maybe, while there hasn't been any interaction with any other female characters for now, but I'm just in the fourth year so there's still time.
4mth
1
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Trojan_HeartVirus
Trojan_HeartVirusLv2

Reveal spoiler

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Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv5

This is a pretty good translation. And the MC is interesting. Everyone knows his nature but he is still operating in plain sight. I loved that! usually the MC hides and plans and so on... it's gotten boring. Kudos on this wonderful editing and i hope to see this continued.

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ItzVatsal12
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It's really good. Much beter than most of Harry Potter book. [img=recommend]

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Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3

So far everything is very good, the MC is interesting, the system doesn't influence him, which in my point of view is great. That's it for now, I'll wait for more updates, I just hope that the Translator doesn't abandon this work midway.

1yr
FallenAngelN
FallenAngelNLv11

Eh, it was great for awhile, and you could see effort at first, but then the story became lazy Chinese Manhua trash. Where the MC keeps putting people in their place while catching underage harem members like they're Pokemon. A shame really.

1yr
thescorpiona
thescorpionaLv14

im pretty sure i read the mtl of this a while ago, it is pretty good from what i remember. pls continue translating this for people who dislike mtl(havent checked the quality,hope its good)

1yr
Lecc
LeccLv14

A great story, with a decently well written MC but it has one flaw, it really has a Harem of 12-13 year olds. I do find that disturbing in so many levels, I'm just glad it hasn't escalated beyond kisses on the cheek. But I really can't with a REINCARNATOR having a harem of little girls. The author could have atleast waited till they were further along near the end of the books to escalate into this. (I know this is translated). It does spoil the story a bit, but if you look past that this whole arc is pretty well made. If you're like me and read basically all the HP fanfics possible. This one sits in the middle because of what is stated above, if not it would be in the top cut.

1yr
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Translator doesn't change all the cringe lines by MC when talking to any female character but changes actual interaction. A kiss on the lips gets changed to a light brush of a kiss to the cheek. Why? What the f is this? Changing such a minor thing but leaving all the cringe unchanged. dropped trash. Also MC seems to focus on gacha the whole time, havent seen him train ONCE.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

The TL and updates are quite good, but the story is just meh. Nothing about it that makes me want to keep reading, zero conflict, hence zero plot.

1yr
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