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Lecc
LeccLv141yr
2024-03-19 23:22

A great story, with a decently well written MC but it has one flaw, it really has a Harem of 12-13 year olds. I do find that disturbing in so many levels, I'm just glad it hasn't escalated beyond kisses on the cheek. But I really can't with a REINCARNATOR having a harem of little girls. The author could have atleast waited till they were further along near the end of the books to escalate into this. (I know this is translated). It does spoil the story a bit, but if you look past that this whole arc is pretty well made. If you're like me and read basically all the HP fanfics possible. This one sits in the middle because of what is stated above, if not it would be in the top cut.

The Strongest Dark Lord

Mysteryon
4.4
356 Chs

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Mysteryon
MysteryonAuthor

I did everything I could to delay the relationships but as the story advanced I couldn't keep doing it without having to rewrite everything 馃槄

1yr
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LazyReaderAlways
LazyReaderAlwaysLv4

Understandable. I like that you changed things.

Mysteryon:I did everything I could to delay the relationships but as the story advanced I couldn't keep doing it without having to rewrite everything 馃槄
1yr
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Facundo_Juarez
Facundo_JuarezLv1

The story was good, it's a shame it's a pathetic harem between 12 and 13 year olds. It doesn't make any sense. ................................

1yr

Trojan_HeartVirus
Trojan_HeartVirusLv2

Reveal spoiler

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Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv5

This is a pretty good translation. And the MC is interesting. Everyone knows his nature but he is still operating in plain sight. I loved that! usually the MC hides and plans and so on... it's gotten boring. Kudos on this wonderful editing and i hope to see this continued.

1yr
ItzVatsal12
ItzVatsal12Lv14

It's really good. Much beter than most of Harry Potter book. [img=recommend]

1yr
Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3

So far everything is very good, the MC is interesting, the system doesn't influence him, which in my point of view is great. That's it for now, I'll wait for more updates, I just hope that the Translator doesn't abandon this work midway.

1yr
FallenAngelN
FallenAngelNLv11

Eh, it was great for awhile, and you could see effort at first, but then the story became lazy Chinese Manhua trash. Where the MC keeps putting people in their place while catching underage harem members like they're Pokemon. A shame really.

1yr
thescorpiona
thescorpionaLv14

im pretty sure i read the mtl of this a while ago, it is pretty good from what i remember. pls continue translating this for people who dislike mtl(havent checked the quality,hope its good)

1yr
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Translator doesn't change all the cringe lines by MC when talking to any female character but changes actual interaction. A kiss on the lips gets changed to a light brush of a kiss to the cheek. Why? What the f is this? Changing such a minor thing but leaving all the cringe unchanged. dropped trash. Also MC seems to focus on gacha the whole time, havent seen him train ONCE.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

The TL and updates are quite good, but the story is just meh. Nothing about it that makes me want to keep reading, zero conflict, hence zero plot.

1yr
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