Usiel

Dear author, Kindly take your attention and shove it somewhere where the sun do not shine. All my reviews are based on my liking: -Smart and Selfish MC's -Evil and/or Antihero MC's I'm simply writing from a point of view where ppl like me checks and decides to read or not. Instead of deciding where to concentrate your attention I humbly suggest to think better titles instead of winterseed 45 etc. Have a nice day and blessings of your god/gods. PS: On behalf of all the readers on this platform and others, thank you for creating something to read. Even though i personally did not like this story/fiction hopefully in the future you'll write somethin to my taste as well.

This is another approach to western stories by ching chong youg master idiocy. MC is godlike yet lowers himself to deal idiotic trio. A hero wannabe with chinese cultivations vibes, and a really bad one at that. Nothing dark nothing villainous.

First of all there are 2 MC's so starting with minus for ppl who doesn't like this idiocy. The vampire MC is a moron. Staying idle for 1 week without doing anything while the human female MC cultivates and trains. Author made it this way so he can keep both of them close to each other's power level i think. The plot is not moving at all more like its pushing yourself through and uncomplete stories. Constant PoV changes are another headache. Overall even the title says vampire half the chapters as nothing to do with anything vampire. Author adds new side characters each 2-3 chapter. There is the human trainer the lamia the idiotic adventurers, kids of the adventurers, hostage the adventurers took and tortured for 2-3 chapters and killed after that. Which makes all that chapters pure fillers. I do not recommend this cluster-rock and it's really funny that there is not even 1 negative comment. Like someone is deleting them... The best part of this crude joke of a novel is it's paywall.

clearly another piece of ching chong translation with low quality plot lower quality characters, childish and cringe MC. sentences are simple at best kindergarten level at worst. %85 percent is pure fillers with no plot development and simply a money trap. i do not recommend this.

This a fantastic read. Except for naivety of the MC. I've checked till ch100 and all the way there he is crying out for GM points while he has spent about 40% of his total points on strangers for fcks sake are you Santa?!!! Mc keeps telling that he is not a hero yet whenever there is a trouble and/or some idiot who needs help you'll see him there. Have some consistency author. Your skill with English is lovely. I really do like the story yet the way -friends- of your MC's treatment to him keeps a lot to be desired... Greeting him by beating the sht out of him??? and he is allowing that for the sake of friendship... Hopefully you'll fix this utter stupidity called "power of friendship" about the circle of your MC. It was OK when it was 2-3 ppl but now he is feeding about 20+ ppl with his points.. I despise naive, good hearted, heroic idiots and your MC is reeking. So i recommend anyone who dislikes idiotic doormats as an MC to keep away. Ppl who likes to read kindergarten stories with good grammar and MC with the intelligence of a troll with special needs go for it. Good luck to author.

Lets start with the worst; MC is an utter idiot, a pushover and a wuss. The Author has the strange idea of nerfing him on chapter 30ish and heal him on the next chapter for no reason other then make him learn healing magic which he already knows a bit better. I'm saying a bit better because while he has the opportunity to grow his fire/earth/water bending through healing the -nerves- he simply doesn't. He has no feeling for any of the nations yet he doesn't care about fire bending at all he just simply learned the basics and left it there. The reason I'm calling the MC a wuss and a pushover; Two of the noble families from the earth kingdom send 2 dozens of assassins to kill him, his response is spending time in the nearest brothel and let bygones be bygones. Even though being a master water bender he ask Paku to teach him northern style and Paku sends him to do some manual labor to earn his lessons... All in all it's a bad example. Mostly a chinese bullcr*p, modified by the author to be more readable by normal ppl. Give it a go if you want, I'm considering my time spent in vain after reading all the available chapters.

As of Ch.34 MC has a quest to help fury, this is where i'm leaving this sorry excuse of hero wannabe. MC has no one respecting him and being a pushover was reason enough but to go and help shield as an active quest... Good luck to author.

It's good for a neutral MC. Only issues i have till now is why he is tolerating shield, why is he gifting demonic artifacts left and right. Especially to natasha.. She is fury's bit*h through and through. Also Fury is just another hydra leader without being hydra :) I can even say that he is worse then hydra itself, i do not like fictions where MC is helping or assisting shield in anyway.

I personally do not see the reason why you can write how you liked the fiction yet i can not express how i did not. There are ppl out there who do not want to read 30+/- chapters to understand the concept. I surely do read comments before starting to read a novel/fiction on this and other platforms. Comments like mine are helpful to ppl who has similar tastes to mine. Simply the freedom of speech fellow reader. No need to be on the defense.

MC is a pathetic wuss, who is happy to be blasted -twice- by jubilee and beaten by jean yet still smiling about it. His modus operandi about not spilling blood is idiotic. He is as smart as a rock to start to master lower end powers compared to others for a whole year. So if you do not have anything else to read try this -vigilante- (hero wannabe) MC and his wuss personality.