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2024-01-27 01:19

Well, another novel with potential, but what will we get? The generic +1500 caps?? Harem?? A successful MC, strong, handsome and for whom every girl who sees him needs to go change her underwear?? What could make this novel different? Will the author dare not to put a harem? Or even romance?? From the synopsis it seems like a "cold and emotionless" MC, but from experience and in the face of all expectations, they are the ones who end up having a harem with more women 🤣🤣🤣, I laugh so as not to cry. Author, you still have time not to screw up, unless you are one of those who puts your mental fantasies, which is not bad, but if it is that type, it is better to visit certain platforms before writing, you will 100% see how some ideas change. of romance and you will see the dissonance that is formed, not only in this one but in all of them, I don't know if you have noticed but the readers of this application are mostly people with 0 EQ who I bet a large part has not had a girlfriend, and If we talk about virginity I won't even comment on it, then when it comes to wanting harem or excessive romance things, you just need to think a little, whoever already has it in reality doesn't need to read about it because they already experience it, I personally don't experience it. normally be strong enough to go to space or split stars, then I see novels where there are people like that to excite me, then where does romance or even worse, the harem come in? 🤣🤣 This is something I've been thinking about for a while and it made me realize the type of people who read harem novels, or at least like them, I'm going to give an analogy "those who like NTR think they're the guy with who the girl cheats on the boyfriend" that is the type of mentality of a good part, not only of your readers, of the people of this platform, both authors and readers. Well, I see potential that's why I put effort into that comment and I hope that this novel goes well for you no matter what decision you make, good luck.

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Nah_I_shall_pirateLv4

yeah I agree with u but what's wrong with successfull mc is he supposed to be always suffering or slave to be called "Written well"?

EternalsylphLv14

I'm going to give an example, why do I want to see a rich person get richer? It is more difficult to go from being poor to rich, than from rich to billionaire because money generates more money, if the MC is successful from the beginning, let's say a martial clan and he is ultra talented, what do I have to do with it? A machine that receives resources and becomes stronger without meaning? Where is the spirit? Mental strengthening? I give more priority to the mental and spiritual growth of the MC than to his powers. If I have to choose, I'll stay with the one who gave everything and I always look for more, to improve myself, not simply a resource eater. I am looking to read someone transcendental but I want to see how they develop their mentality up to that moment because it seems more important to me, just like when they begin to deduce their own path and not the one stipulated by their rich clan.

Nah_I_shall_pirate:yeah I agree with u but what's wrong with successfull mc is he supposed to be always suffering or slave to be called "Written well"?
Nah_I_shall_pirateLv4

Well watching the mc grow is one of the best thing for a novel, I just hate it when even after 300+chapters of hardwork. the mc still poor or not seeing any development. like they write the whole plot to make the mc weak,pathetic. and make the development at the end of the novel.

Eternalsylph:I'm going to give an example, why do I want to see a rich person get richer? It is more difficult to go from being poor to rich, than from rich to billionaire because money generates more money, if the MC is successful from the beginning, let's say a martial clan and he is ultra talented, what do I have to do with it? A machine that receives resources and becomes stronger without meaning? Where is the spirit? Mental strengthening? I give more priority to the mental and spiritual growth of the MC than to his powers. If I have to choose, I'll stay with the one who gave everything and I always look for more, to improve myself, not simply a resource eater. I am looking to read someone transcendental but I want to see how they develop their mentality up to that moment because it seems more important to me, just like when they begin to deduce their own path and not the one stipulated by their rich clan.
Jacob_WinklerLv15

iImean most people like harem bro. so stop complaining about novels being harem instead go find the 1 in 10 good non harem book.

TranquilConsortLv4

bro(if you aren't a bro no offence) you really cooked

ace_spreeLv1

I hate when mc is weak they always suffer non stop and never get better till close to the end

Patrick_ConnersLv15

agree 100%

Jacob_Winkler:iImean most people like harem bro. so stop complaining about novels being harem instead go find the 1 in 10 good non harem book.
lordomLv1

hahah. i felt happy knowing there are readers who like non harem, non romance books. although I don't really hate novels that involves romance(how can I hate a novel if i haven't even read it) now I have swore myself to write books without romance and harem. but i guess coming into books saying" it's involves harem, it's lame" not the best use of your time. and also all top book are non harem ex- my vampire system, ss

lordomLv1

you have to suffer to be a successful dude. life is not easy. unless the meaning of success is different for you.

Nah_I_shall_pirate:yeah I agree with u but what's wrong with successfull mc is he supposed to be always suffering or slave to be called "Written well"?
Nah_I_shall_pirateLv4

have u read what i commented, my problem is not the mc's suffering, i just hate it when the author makes it the plot and any "success" the mc would gain is just another suffering, this will turn the story bland for me because in the end it will just be another repeatitive trash, suffering should not be a genre, and i want to see the mc overcome it, and actualy get an actuall success instade of another suffering

lordom:you have to suffer to be a successful dude. life is not easy. unless the meaning of success is different for you.
lordomLv1

suffering. overcomes. another suffering. enjoys suffering. irl success is hard. and if you want to motivate your readers make a mc who goes through all of that but still doesn't give up. i know what you are saying. that's your preference. it's my preference. people talk about how hard mc of solo leveling worked. lol. even David is tougher than him. i don't want mc who becomes the strongest in countries after 1000 push ups and the strongest in the world after 10000 push ups. and those mc with excessive plot armour and golden fingers? let's not talk about them. bet even you might not like them. but if success means -- a peaceful life. and suffering means -- sadness because of someone's death, depressed, getting hate by others... we are not in the same line.

Nah_I_shall_pirate:have u read what i commented, my problem is not the mc's suffering, i just hate it when the author makes it the plot and any "success" the mc would gain is just another suffering, this will turn the story bland for me because in the end it will just be another repeatitive trash, suffering should not be a genre, and i want to see the mc overcome it, and actualy get an actuall success instade of another suffering
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