Jacob_Winkler

bro what's up with the repeating in this novel I would say 1/4 of this chapter has been voided because it has been said more than once and some of it has been repeated thrice. it's already been stated and talked about at length earlier in the chapter in the chapter before in the chapter before that the same statement. worded differently. this has to stop or else I'm dropping this novel.

captains*

stomping*

bro great minds think alike me and this author are on the same wavelength I'm just weeks behind. also never mind my comment was negated lower in this chapter where he used the same idea I had

couldn't he just activate his transformation and he would be looking more demon than human at that point.

I'm just saying it right now in reality silencers aren't as quiet as people think it's like dropping a thick Bible in a echoey church with no people there it's pretty loud. not just a small pfft sound. in fact silencers only lower the decibels by like 30 from like 160 to 120 hundred and thirty. now this is a novel and it's a fantasy Urban novel so this comment isn't really meant as criticism or to change the book in any way it was just let the Arthur know if he didn't know that.

if it doesn't shoot in a combat situation you can just rack it you don't have to take out the magazine.

sorry that's wrong when actually shooting a handgun if it jams or misfires the correct term you're supposed to first keep the gun pointed down range for 30 seconds cuz it could be a hang fire where it takes a second to fire. then after 30 seconds if a bullet still didn't shoot you're tap rack bang. meaning you tap the magazine up cuz maybe the magazine isn't all the way in the gun that's really common then you rack it and then you can keep shooting bang.

how is that realistic an almost epic bosses skill only doing 10 points damage when the mc was doing that with a regular punch multiple times in a row. the damage this thing does is not up to scale with current world building. with the way the world has been built in this novel that move should have done like at least 50 DAMAGE. mabey less since he noticed the attack and was able to prepare for it. but he was still hit by and attack from a creature 5 levels above him not to mention it's a boss creature also not to mention it's almost epic. to put that into perspective there is common boss uncommon and rare at least before epic. so am attack like that should have done more then 10 points damage.

luck skill should help