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Kotik_Kotik
Kotik_KotikLv51yr
2023-12-13 06:34

I've now read 37 chapters and honestly I'm a bit lost, i wanted to like the story. the concept is pretty cool but it just never clicked. it's probably a combination of multiple factors, weird pacing, surprisingly little focus on the power system while getting stuck in the less important jazz of the citadels life that i wouldn't even call effective world building as it doesn't evoke any curiosity. The human interactions seemed strange (i know it's a stylistic attempt to create a structure that would inspire more immersion by creating something non standard but it falls flat imo) mc mostly seems like an empty vessel that doesn't get enough agency to feel like an actual person. ultimately, i felt apathetic pretty much the entire way, something that you never want to say about a book but alas it's true. I'm still a little curious about how his skill tree might grow but at this point i cant justify investing anymore time into this read. but make your own judgements. it may just not have been for me.

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Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_TakLv3

from my opinion it's boring. I mean how much curiosity and plot can expect from this novel, 1 fight with monster

Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_TakLv3

2. righteous hero type, that suddenly become like that from inexperience and naive orphanage boy , 2. hero of humanity that only fights with monsters 3. fight with monsters, different types of monsters, stronger monsters, grows stronger and fight with monsters, and fight with monsters and FIGHT WITH MONSTERS . boring RIGHT. 😬😬😬😬😬😬😪😴😪😴😪😴😪😴😪😴

Suk_min_Tak
Suk_min_TakLv3

oh I forgot that mc also changed a small villain to righteous path with his power of righteousness heart 😁😁😁 boring right, right right right right RIGHT 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

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Eternalsylph
EternalsylphLv14

Well, another novel with potential, but what will we get? The generic +1500 caps?? Harem?? A successful MC, strong, handsome and for whom every girl who sees him needs to go change her underwear?? What could make this novel different? Will the author dare not to put a harem? Or even romance?? From the synopsis it seems like a "cold and emotionless" MC, but from experience and in the face of all expectations, they are the ones who end up having a harem with more women 🤣🤣🤣, I laugh so as not to cry. Author, you still have time not to screw up, unless you are one of those who puts your mental fantasies, which is not bad, but if it is that type, it is better to visit certain platforms before writing, you will 100% see how some ideas change. of romance and you will see the dissonance that is formed, not only in this one but in all of them, I don't know if you have noticed but the readers of this application are mostly people with 0 EQ who I bet a large part has not had a girlfriend, and If we talk about virginity I won't even comment on it, then when it comes to wanting harem or excessive romance things, you just need to think a little, whoever already has it in reality doesn't need to read about it because they already experience it, I personally don't experience it. normally be strong enough to go to space or split stars, then I see novels where there are people like that to excite me, then where does romance or even worse, the harem come in? 🤣🤣 This is something I've been thinking about for a while and it made me realize the type of people who read harem novels, or at least like them, I'm going to give an analogy "those who like NTR think they're the guy with who the girl cheats on the boyfriend" that is the type of mentality of a good part, not only of your readers, of the people of this platform, both authors and readers. Well, I see potential that's why I put effort into that comment and I hope that this novel goes well for you no matter what decision you make, good luck.

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