hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/ kaida

hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/ KOMI

Naruto: The Wind Calamity Devil_Hex ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎

if he is a senju then why is he living in an orphanage????

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Love the story and thanks for updating so frequently Also this is what I’m imagining the mc looks like when he gets older

Alright this is actually a decent fanfic. No system, no ludicrous wish fulfilment nonsense. There are a few flaws though. The first is that you obviously do not proofread. The second is that your attention to standard writing rules is half assed : You do not start your sentences with capitals, you write numbers with symbols instead of letters. Lastly, sometimes it gets a little too much with other’s reaction of the main character deeds. Many times I have found myself half sighing/cringing when I read Hiruzen thinking "how is he this good oh my god 🥵🥵". No. He is Hiruzen Sarutobi, he has seen Jounin level seven year-old before and all kind of prodigees through his decades of kagedom. Get that fixed, and your story will level up in quality greatly. I wish you the best !

I tried to read this book but it became too much for me this book isn’t even about mc himself.. that oc girl is like tail of the mc every single chapter you describe every move of the mc with her, like they went to sleep they trained together bla bla. There is no character development at all. not worth it

Logically, the novel is progressing in a manageable way for now. The only problem is that the girl next to the MC can somehow keep up with him. And the girl has no special lineage. It's uploaded almost every day. The average episode length is neither too short nor too long.