The_Best_3329

Honestly this is way better and makes the world feel more real.

Then he can convince his opponents like Naruto 😂

Well when I read a conversation unless mentioned otherwise I read it as a normally flowing conversation without big delays 🤔

So looking for the easy way not his personal power aside from the fact that this big family would probably be at least 1% of Britains overall magical population. Very very unbelievable

Ngl I really don’t like your fight scenes for some reason. Also you always make the mc win but he feel just weak as if he wins just by coincidence

What a waste of an chapter 😅

If he the master alchemist doesn’t make a quick communication thing the iq of your character will be considered very low

Author did you really forget that he knows he’s a parselmouth

He knows he’s a parselmouth and he knows that it’s slytherans pet why would he thinks Snape would call him crazy

Tbh the quickly spoke feels not right most of the time it seems like he’s very hurried and at least in my imagination it makes him seem squeamish 🤔