Worn_out_by
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Worn_out_by4dReplied to Owais_Khan_4634Facts lol
P.S. Is it too much gore, or is it okay? Are similar chapters needed?- Worn_out_by4dCommented
Don’t mention kavya in the same breath when he mentions HIs dream dying she has nothing to do with it😂
Looking around, Vijay found that there were only Ten of his guards remaining alive, and a captive, as the rest of his guards had died. He felt sad for them but also relieved that he was alive. He quickly met up with Kavya; fortunately, she was relatively unharmed. Kavya was startled at first after seeing Vijay drenched in blood, but upon realizing it was not his, she burst into tears and ran forward to hug him. Vijay also hugged her with relief on his face, ignoring the blood he painted Kavya with. Vijay was very thankful that Kavya was alright. Vijay became angry again as he remembered that he and Kavya could have almost died, potentially leaving the Empire in chaos and destroying the Bharata dream forever. Vijay felt restless and could not wait any longer. - Worn_out_by4dCommented
Would mean more if she had more of a role in this novel
Seeing the cracks that almost made it a quarter of the way through the boulder, Vijay knew that this couldn't go on. "God dammit," Vijay exclaimed as he unsheathed his Talwar. His eyes turned red as he ordered, "100 of you form a defensive formation around the queen. If something happens to her, it will be your heads that will roll." Vijay was in an irrational rage as he was about to let the remaining guards follow him. The guard captain, noticing this, wanted to dissuade Vijay from doing such dangerous things, but his pleading was taken as nothing, as Vijay's decision did not change. So, he tried to ask Kavya to convince His Majesty, "Your Highness, the queen, Please try to convince His Majesty not to do such dangerous things." Suddenly, Kavya's hand held onto Vijay's clothes. When he turned around, Vijay saw that Kavya had recovered from the shock of the explosion and the death of the maid, putting on a brave posture. She touched the wound on her hand, took some of her blood from it, and drew a Tilak on Vijay's forehead. She said with a brave expression, contrary to what the guard captain expected, "Come back victorious." - Worn_out_by4dCommented
Yeah honestly awful character kinda upsetting that the author doesn’t develop her she has zero substance for Vijay let alone as being the Queen no redeeming value to be around might as well as kill her off and get a different character
Kavya noticed a plate of sweets placed in front of her. Normally, she refrains from indulging in sweets ever since Vijay playfully commented, "If you eat too many sweets, you may become fat." Even though she understood Vijay said it in jest, she took those words to heart. The weight of her role as the Queen of such a vast and powerful empire often made her restless and uneasy. She was aware that not all of Vijay's subjects fully embraced her as the queen. Additionally, the absence of an heir added to her uneasiness. Despite Vijay's reassurances that the matter would be resolved in a few months, Kavya couldn't shake off the feeling of unease. - Worn_out_by4dCommented
Worst ever partner/ romantic partner goes to kavya
Fortunately, Umashree's father also wanted the same thing. So, both families called a priest to settle on a date for the couple's marriage. Surprisingly, the priest said the marriage should be completed within the month, and he also informed that the nearest Shuba dhina (Good day) for marriage is due in a week. So yes, Hey Ram's marriage will go according to tradition and not how Vijay got married hurriedly. Well, that was because Vijay's marriage took place in a time of war, so Vijay had no time to waste. Anyway, Vijay had informed Kavya to attend the marriage process, and he would join her on the final day. - Worn_out_by6dCommented
Yeah that isn’t the reason back then it was all about status afterall daughters were just strategic social ladders
Hearing the result, Vijay let go of his frowning brows. As it was not a security threat, he didn't consider the cook's intentions offensive, understanding the desire for one's daughter to live a good life. - Worn_out_by8dCommented
What he look like
Max Sullivan - Worn_out_by8dCommented
What does mc look like
I grinned and gave Alex a playful nudge. "Don't worry, buddy. Your time will come." - Worn_out_by8dReplied to f3f3
Considering they only act like that in movies, tv and Books I highly doubt it
Of course, you couldn't miss the jocks, towering over everyone, their jerseys proclaiming their athletic prowess. They'd be tossing a basketball or trading sports trivia like it's the secret language of the hallway. - Worn_out_by9dCommented
The other sibling just at the nest like huh where everybody at
Quickly the new men that arrived had picked Evelyn's parents up, while Vorigos grabbed Evelyn's brother and Karsyn took ahold of Evelyn who was as still as a statue. - Worn_out_by9dCommented
It’s just annoying how the author makes her act
'I know that my adventurism got me in trouble before, but this time is different.' - Worn_out_by9dCommented
Too much dramatics
'Is she not going to save me? Have I been deemed a failure?' Evelyn thought, as she counited to fall and her mother made no move to help her. - Worn_out_by9dCommented
Wel you dumb so
'Great, am I going to die again. Just when I had finally come to terms with being an owl, this happens. And I was actually really looking forward to flying.' - Worn_out_by9dCommented
Bad spelling off rip and wishes off rip yep confirmed going to be a bad fic
Now for my wishes I have to really think deeply about what I want as I'm not very smart I have just the thing to help me "For my first wish I whish to have the ability of Great Sage from Tensura" This wish opens so many possibilities for me that no matter what world I go it will be extremely helpful. - Worn_out_by9dCommented
Any fanfic with wishes always ends up bad before it starts
" You're right I am but a random omnipotent being and as the show goes for my entertainment I shall grant you 3 wishes and you shall put the most grandiose of shows". - Worn_out_by9dCommented
Meh kinda hope he doesn’t stay contracted
With his newfound abilities, he knew exactly how to use them and what to do to save himself and his contractor, Bel. - Worn_out_by9dCommented
As it was already named that
"OK, I have decided, I will call you Ossa. It means bones, you know because you are made of bones," she announced, feeling rather proud of herself. - Worn_out_by10dCommented
Yeah wish she was more than just a trophy because the author made it seem like she was a good fashion designer but than proceeds to just relegate her to 1900’s wife duty
She has a thin waist, not a waist like the models in his previous life, but a healthy and beautiful waist that is well-proportioned to the rest of her body. Being very tall, she has long and full legs and a prominent and well-proportioned back. As for the chest, due to Vijay's hard work, he had brought her from a C cup to a 32D cup. Vijay smiled as Kavya walked towards him with a sway that made him crazy. He watched the chest shake with each step, and the barely visible slit on the chest made it more tempting, *gulp*; he has completely fallen for this woman, who could very well be the most beautiful in the world, his wife. - Worn_out_by10dCommented
It would be nice if she interacted with characters known and the city in general
She has a height of 5 feet 6 inches (167.64 cm), which is considered tall among women, with black eyes and hair like a waterfall cascading down to her waist. She also has Maratha women's features on her face, giving her expression a little zing. - Worn_out_by10dCommented
Wow we finally see her after how many chapters? might as wel get rid of her or add her to scenes where he isn’t there because she has no significance in anything except feeding mc
He thought to himself as he picked up a towel, which was on the wooden shelf nearest to him. As he wiped away the sweat on his body, Kavya arrived bringing with her a powder of Shikakai (Acacia concinna, Used as shampoo). Kavya has grown a lot since he married her at the age of 16; now she is 20 years old.