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Efe_Kaymak
Efe_KaymakLv47mth
2024-05-14 02:15

I tried to read this book but it became too much for me this book isn’t even about mc himself.. that oc girl is like tail of the mc every single chapter you describe every move of the mc with her, like they went to sleep they trained together bla bla. There is no character development at all. not worth it

Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja

FirstHokage
4.1
308 Chs

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FirstHokage
FirstHokageAuthor

umm, it was only in starting chapters only, in later part of the story Yomi is not mentioned that offen, also story actually become interesting after the involvement of Uchiha clan, I am a beginner writer so I know made many mistakes in starting chapter, but I am trying to improve that in chapters after 100 😊

7mth
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Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15

No one will slog through all of it though is the bad part

FirstHokage:umm, it was only in starting chapters only, in later part of the story Yomi is not mentioned that offen, also story actually become interesting after the involvement of Uchiha clan, I am a beginner writer so I know made many mistakes in starting chapter, but I am trying to improve that in chapters after 100 😊
7mth
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FirstHokage
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hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/ kaida

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FirstHokage
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hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/ KOMI

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Naruto: The Wind Calamity Devil_Hex ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎

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ARSENAL_101
ARSENAL_101Lv4

if he is a senju then why is he living in an orphanage????

1yr
The_Best_3329
The_Best_3329Lv4

Really everything was fine until the mc got emotionally blackmailed into accepting another girl. It’s really disappointing. Even the relationship with the other girl is really flat and is just nice to read or to be ignored. And no one ever come at me with strong people alwys have many girls around them. Every strong ninja in Naruto has 1 wife. Was good until chap 54 even tho it was basically a training montage

9mth
ChibiPanda65
ChibiPanda65Lv14

Love the story and thanks for updating so frequently Also this is what I’m imagining the mc looks like when he gets older

10mth
Rowan_Wild
Rowan_WildLv14

Alright this is actually a decent fanfic. No system, no ludicrous wish fulfilment nonsense. There are a few flaws though. The first is that you obviously do not proofread. The second is that your attention to standard writing rules is half assed : You do not start your sentences with capitals, you write numbers with symbols instead of letters. Lastly, sometimes it gets a little too much with other’s reaction of the main character deeds. Many times I have found myself half sighing/cringing when I read Hiruzen thinking "how is he this good oh my god 🥵🥵". No. He is Hiruzen Sarutobi, he has seen Jounin level seven year-old before and all kind of prodigees through his decades of kagedom. Get that fixed, and your story will level up in quality greatly. I wish you the best !

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RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

Reveal spoiler

8mth
PaTTeS
PaTTeSLv10

Logically, the novel is progressing in a manageable way for now. The only problem is that the girl next to the MC can somehow keep up with him. And the girl has no special lineage. It's uploaded almost every day. The average episode length is neither too short nor too long.

1yr
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