This is too much out of canon. All characters are rewritten in authors image. The story gets slower with each chapter. At first the story was very fast paced with a lot of time skips and characters you could say were canon, but now... Chapters have so many bulls.... details, that the story barely progresses. At this rate author will need about a thousand or even more chapters just to finish this fic.
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Thanks for your review! This is rather unexpected since my other viewers are telling me to hurry up and diverge from the canon already! If you take a look at a review given a few days before yours, that reader was of the opinion that everything in my story was the same. As the author, I’m being pulled in two different directions! And well, it’ll be quite difficult to write a story if all the characters stayed absolutely the same. If you’re referring to some character that are way off like Popo and Nappa, well, there’s not a whole lot I can say there. I certainly couldn’t work with the originals since they did literally nothing in the canon… I did try, however to make the progression of the important characters start from a common point and progress logically. Goku is still the same but a little more serious and sassy. Gohan is a little more confident. Krillin isn’t as much of a coward. And Vegeta was more fleshed out but still the prideful Prince we know! As for the length, I did make a note in Chapter 0 that this is quite a long term project. Hopefully the story being long wasn’t too big of a surprise! That being said, I can see how too much useless details can clog up a story so I’ll pay more attention to it in the future!
so first you guys coming that it's to much in Canon and then next you guys complain it's out of Canon.These reviews are emotional reviews.
Well guess they don't have a council to come to a consensus like that is the authors job. We are all just giving our preferences.
