Okay, that's a really well written story, but that's not a story for me, read about an MC so weak and useless isn't my cup of tea, 20 chapters and the Mc hasn't changed anything in the cannon besides some small "butterfly effects", an mc that have trained for 20 chapters and still got used as a baseball bat for radditz isn't an mc that I wanna keep following. I know that you wanna make some development, and I really like to read some weak to strong, but when the Mc is just weak and you plan make him strong in 200 chapters, that's not a pacing for me.
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Fair enough! Its not really as far off as you’re thinking though. But hey, everyone have different preferences for their stories, I can respect that! Perhaps you can give my story another try when it has accumulated more chapters and when he’s past the “weak” phase!
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Equuleus_Nox:Fair enough! Its not really as far off as you’re thinking though. But hey, everyone have different preferences for their stories, I can respect that! Perhaps you can give my story another try when it has accumulated more chapters and when he’s past the “weak” phase!image
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I mean, everyone was treated as a baseball by Raditz at this point
Honestly speaking I quite agree with this comment being the MC is quite weak, but if he can eventually grow like Jiren that's a another matter
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