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2024-01-22 15:17

The lowest form of fanfiction in existence is a canon tag-a-long story. That’s where an OC joins the story and contributes absolutely nothing...they're just there to spectate.

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Equuleus_Nox
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I can see how you arrived to that conclusion! We’re only on arc one though, and my main storyline hadn’t even started yet. We’re around 8-9% completion right now, if that? Every fanfiction needs to start from a common point somewhere, no? My story is, however, constructed from the question of: “it is impossible for a human to become strong.” I think yes. To answer that question though, I can’t exactly make up stuff that doesn’t exist in the original story. MC will use resources only available or feasible in the canon to achieve his strength. This does mean that my story will have quite some similarities to the original storyline, however I hardly think it’s just copy and paste, or I would’ve posted just my answer to some blog and called it a day! Sure, some events will be the same, but the context, subtext, character development, and motivations will be different! You may not be satisfied with that explanation, and that’s fine! Everyone is entitled to their opinion and not everyone will enjoy the same type of story. Some people like action and fighting, some people suspense and mystery, others character development, etc. Some might think that all are important and some might think only one of them important. I can respect that and your opinion. If your main concern is that the story will end up like a copy and paste, then you hardly need to worry after my story had ran on for a bit. This one will be start slow, end strong! Thanks for reading!

kamiryuken
kamiryukenLv14

i think the problem it's not the slow développement of the history, but the "change nothing". i like this fanfic because of the chang of POV with the " human cant be strong" aspect . but you need to understand that, when you read a fanfic, you know the story and you want to see a change in this story. and it's good that you have not started the main plot ( mote chapter [img=recommend]) but it's frustrating to see all change in character, environnement, context... but the final we have the same story with minimal change because the OC average if you compare with the power needed to have a active mc. all we read actualy is a passive mc, so it's like we read the same story but with another POV.

Equuleus_Nox
Equuleus_NoxAuthor

Got it! The Namek arc might not have as much changes as some might like, but that’s because Ajax is still not strong enough to flip the boat yet. Im aiming for something like Dragon Ball abridged, where you kind of know that the story will be the same, but you also know things will be different!

kamiryuken:i think the problem it's not the slow développement of the history, but the "change nothing". i like this fanfic because of the chang of POV with the " human cant be strong" aspect . but you need to understand that, when you read a fanfic, you know the story and you want to see a change in this story. and it's good that you have not started the main plot ( mote chapter [img=recommend]) but it's frustrating to see all change in character, environnement, context... but the final we have the same story with minimal change because the OC average if you compare with the power needed to have a active mc. all we read actualy is a passive mc, so it's like we read the same story but with another POV.
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Keyaruga_Tsuki
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good story by far the best in terms of Dragon Ball Fan Fics. 1. The main character of this story is a human and I think that's amazing,I'm tired of watching drgaon ball fanfics have the same trope of an overpowered sayain blah blah blah.Its very predictable and this is a new way of going about it and so far so good. 2.Some of you may be worried about him being human because if the fact its dragon ball and their are bigger forces at play like Frieza ect,Yes the Main character knows this and he wishes for an amazing ability throught the earthly dragonballs.Do not believe anyone telling you that the ability is nerfed or underwhelming,They are the same people expecting a fast paced story where the Mc becomes an "ancient legendary God baby big boy sayain" like grow up. 3.The writing quality is amazing so far so good,My only problem with this is the updating schedule, It's very slow but that's just my opinion it's steady I think it's like 1 chapter per week..I'm just addicted and want more...but yeah I did end up giving the updating stability 3 stars it should be 4 stars but I just want more chapters.. 4.World background not much to say on this end, It's a DragonBall fanfic everything is described well so like...idk bro it's DragonBall we know what everything looks like already bit the descriptions are great as well. 5.Story development is amazing.I love how it develops in such a nice pace.Not everything is happening fast and oh my God,The way characters react to his actions is amazing for example when he killed ___ person to forward the plot, Piccolo was questioning him and others looking at him suspiciously or when he let _____ person die,That also raised a few eye brows.His actions affect the reactions if those around him and I think that's great because UT brings more life to the side characters around him. 6.Overall this story is a 4.0 at least for me and I would give it a higher rating If the author just dropped more chapters 😭. The development is nicely done,Writing quality amazing,Sidr characters feel real and not just there for convenience,World background is great but I've already watched the show so I know what things look like but the descriptions can help you picture them better as well. 7.Advice, Moving forward I would like if the author posted images of what he was describing and what the main character did look like, I've seen other novels and fan fics do this and I think it would be a great addition if you just add a text that says image and then posted a picture of what you want us to see as readers by commenting on the image.That would be amazing as well.Please do update more if you can, I think this will help your fanfic grow faster because by all means I think this fanfic is the DragonBall version of Naruto faint smile both stories are peak.

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