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Thank You! You are the only ben 10 fanfuc mate
This guy is the most gifted author I have seen! I have been reading novels and fanfics for years and I have read quite a few. But only this one is somthing I have no complaints with even with my nitpicking nature. Of course there are some minor thing like the names being changed abruptly the next chapter etc. But all in all this was much more fun then watching or reading tensura anime/novels! Although you don't need to watch them to enjoy this. Although he wrote the sypnosis like this is Shakespeare don't worry the story is written with simple words. Finally, thank you author for sharing this of yours!
Can you make a more stable update schedule even if you have to make shorter chapters? Because obviously you didn't write a chapter in one day. Normally a chapter like that takes a week right? I dont want to wait a week for a cliffhanger.
I love adult sasuke fanfics like this one. Although would it not make sense for him to get together with sakura earlier so that Sarada has more time to train? Also the execution is great and can't think of anything better Although I would have preferred it started on the final battle of end after 4th ninja war. But this was necessary for the plot. Finally, Thank you homie!
No one questioned if he is a Fanalis?! Like there are 3 alive and each becomes a powerhouse. Also why not tell the truth? If he wants to change the world they are critical. Also why were they not bothered by nobles? Each one is equal to an army. A favour can go a long way.
What? How can the captain still say he is on dish duty? Like he can kill them all or just capture the ship. He should be respectful fearing he will kill him for offending him.
To clarify! I don't like system and wanted one where a someone reaches the peak. The point in anime I have reached was where Simba is half fallen. I want to see what if he couldn’t be stopped by Genies. Can he break the limits of immortality!
Alright! Is this a translation? Source(It aint in Sypnosis)? How many chapters is it? Is it ongoing? Harem? Lemon? I was dying and couldn't find one! This has system but still tell me about it!
I read it and actually it seems that he asks chatgpt for ideas also. The A.I does the majority. Because it is the same template all over again as if he is using a textbook example step by step on how to write it. Like there ain't much originality. The main problem it MC'S personality! It is a cliche stereotype. Totally unlike your average guy which I wanted. I didn't want another Po who just lives for righteousness.
Ok Boomer!