Trash fic with misleading title. MC doesn’t deserve to be called a Darth, he’s a sith pretender. He forced Boba Fett to pay a mechanic that tried to steal their ship after fixing it. When we finally got to see him act like a real sith for once by beating up and torturing a sith girl that mocked and tried to kill him he throws it all down the drain by getting ashamed of his actions under the disappointed and dissatisfied gaze of a JEDI WOMAN. He kept the sith girl alive and wasted a high grade healing potion on her because he FELT responsible for her and also to appease Shaak Ti’s dissatisfication. Shaak Ti simp. (Already has a force bond with her) He calls himself a Darth yet he plans to spare the sith girl a second time if she tries to kill him, fowking clown. All his threats, plans and acting like a cold pragmatic sith is fake which is evident when Shaaki Ti reads his TRUE feelings through their force bond. He acts like a tsundere bwch. The fic would have been good if he didn’t call himself a sith a lord. Misleading title, fake sith, fake darth and simp tsundere mc.
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*spoiler alert**spoiler alert* Dear Reader, I want to share some additional information about my character and plot. Hassan, is in a situation where he does not possess the knowledge and skills necessary to pilot spaceships, and he is in a different universe where the rules and conditions are different from his usual reality. Instead, he decides to use his intelligence and resources to find other ways to accomplish his goals, including obtaining ransom and finding potential allies in the Jedi council. In this way, his character is more anti-hero than villain, and it is his intentions and moral dilemmas that give the story additional layers of depth. He also decides to let Tann live so that she can be his assistant in controlling the spaceship and holonet. I hope these additional details have helped clarify my character's personality and motivations. Thank you for your support and interest in my story, and I look forward to your continued participation and questions!
I also understand your concerns about the Mechanic's actions and the disagreements that may have arisen between the characters. It is important to emphasize that the Mechanic did not actually intend to steal the spaceship. He was conducting an operational check of the ship, which was an important step for the safety and successful continuation of our journey. Many people believe that honest labor should be paid, and this is an important moral position. Repairing and maintaining the ship should certainly be paid for, and there is nothing wrong with that. The incident between Darth and Boba and the Mechanicus could have been caused by character impulsiveness or miscommunication, and that is part of the complexity and versatility of our characters. We hope you will continue to follow the development of the plot and characters and enjoy the dynamics of their relationships. Thank you for your interest and attention to the details of the story.
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He is not an anti hero at all. He is a passive good natured hero. Any anti-hero type actions feel forced or like a different character. Frankly, it is beyond disappointing how badly this story and MC have been ran into the ground.
Vandalizer:*spoiler alert**spoiler alert* Dear Reader, I want to share some additional information about my character and plot. Hassan, is in a situation where he does not possess the knowledge and skills necessary to pilot spaceships, and he is in a different universe where the rules and conditions are different from his usual reality. Instead, he decides to use his intelligence and resources to find other ways to accomplish his goals, including obtaining ransom and finding potential allies in the Jedi council. In this way, his character is more anti-hero than villain, and it is his intentions and moral dilemmas that give the story additional layers of depth. He also decides to let Tann live so that she can be his assistant in controlling the spaceship and holonet. I hope these additional details have helped clarify my character's personality and motivations. Thank you for your support and interest in my story, and I look forward to your continued participation and questions!
An antihero is a main character in a literary work who does not exhibit traditional heroic qualities such as bravery or honesty, but instead, can be described as ordinary or even display unappealing qualities such as dishonesty. In the Disney movie, The Emperor’s New Groove, the main character, Kuzco, can be seen as an antihero because he displays negative qualities such as greed. The use of an antihero as the protagonist in a literary work can serve several important purposes. By including a main character with flaws, it creates a more realistic main character. It also allows for the character to exhibit growth if he or she overcomes these flaws. For example, To continue with Kuzco from The Emperor’s New Groove, by having him display characteristics such as greed and selfishness, it allows for him to learn the errors of his ways and become a better person.
CruelReality:He is not an anti hero at all. He is a passive good natured hero. Any anti-hero type actions feel forced or like a different character. Frankly, it is beyond disappointing how badly this story and MC have been ran into the ground.
An antihero is a protagonist that displays qualities that do not align with the traditional hero. The qualities can include laziness, greed, selfishness, i. These characters more accurately depict true human nature because of the flaws given to them.
Vandalizer:An antihero is a main character in a literary work who does not exhibit traditional heroic qualities such as bravery or honesty, but instead, can be described as ordinary or even display unappealing qualities such as dishonesty. In the Disney movie, The Emperor’s New Groove, the main character, Kuzco, can be seen as an antihero because he displays negative qualities such as greed. The use of an antihero as the protagonist in a literary work can serve several important purposes. By including a main character with flaws, it creates a more realistic main character. It also allows for the character to exhibit growth if he or she overcomes these flaws. For example, To continue with Kuzco from The Emperor’s New Groove, by having him display characteristics such as greed and selfishness, it allows for him to learn the errors of his ways and become a better person.
Agreed, playing SWTOR and role playing I understand what you’re trying to say, nothing breaks immersion than seeing some “sith” choosing light side options. If you’re gonna be a sith be a sith, if you’re gonna be a jedi be a jedi and vice versa. But then I guess you have the fact that he’s just some normal dude who has sith powers. So him attempting to be sith but still choose to do good is sort of character “Development”. But yeah he shouldn’t be called a Sith Lord then. Or a sith at all.
it's not character development if that was his character from the start, nothing changed. Moreover, the novel is tagged as 'Villain'
FnaticOtaku:Agreed, playing SWTOR and role playing I understand what you’re trying to say, nothing breaks immersion than seeing some “sith” choosing light side options. If you’re gonna be a sith be a sith, if you’re gonna be a jedi be a jedi and vice versa. But then I guess you have the fact that he’s just some normal dude who has sith powers. So him attempting to be sith but still choose to do good is sort of character “Development”. But yeah he shouldn’t be called a Sith Lord then. Or a sith at all.
So you never planned to make an antihero or villain to begin with if you want your main character to fix his 'flaw' and become a good person eventually. If that's the case then say that, don't tag the novel as villain or antihero when he is becoming gradually good natured. People who want antiheros don't want to read an antihero that becomes a hero, they want an antihero to stay as an antihero, but grow in other ways. Also, why does your response looks like it came out of chatgpt
Vandalizer:An antihero is a main character in a literary work who does not exhibit traditional heroic qualities such as bravery or honesty, but instead, can be described as ordinary or even display unappealing qualities such as dishonesty. In the Disney movie, The Emperor’s New Groove, the main character, Kuzco, can be seen as an antihero because he displays negative qualities such as greed. The use of an antihero as the protagonist in a literary work can serve several important purposes. By including a main character with flaws, it creates a more realistic main character. It also allows for the character to exhibit growth if he or she overcomes these flaws. For example, To continue with Kuzco from The Emperor’s New Groove, by having him display characteristics such as greed and selfishness, it allows for him to learn the errors of his ways and become a better person.
I don’t know SWOTOR but when I was playing KOTOR the choices were too much Black and White
FnaticOtaku:Agreed, playing SWTOR and role playing I understand what you’re trying to say, nothing breaks immersion than seeing some “sith” choosing light side options. If you’re gonna be a sith be a sith, if you’re gonna be a jedi be a jedi and vice versa. But then I guess you have the fact that he’s just some normal dude who has sith powers. So him attempting to be sith but still choose to do good is sort of character “Development”. But yeah he shouldn’t be called a Sith Lord then. Or a sith at all.
Yeah, that’s why I said the fic would have been better if he didn’t introduce himself as a darth.
FnaticOtaku:Agreed, playing SWTOR and role playing I understand what you’re trying to say, nothing breaks immersion than seeing some “sith” choosing light side options. If you’re gonna be a sith be a sith, if you’re gonna be a jedi be a jedi and vice versa. But then I guess you have the fact that he’s just some normal dude who has sith powers. So him attempting to be sith but still choose to do good is sort of character “Development”. But yeah he shouldn’t be called a Sith Lord then. Or a sith at all.
Right? the fic is not that bad but the mc is trash
authors really destroy their good story because of their mcs personality, like a japanese mc the harem one
CruelReality:He is not an anti hero at all. He is a passive good natured hero. Any anti-hero type actions feel forced or like a different character. Frankly, it is beyond disappointing how badly this story and MC have been ran into the ground.
I'm just at chapter 2 and already here in reviews to check if mc simping and being good guy still continues and seeing other reviews its disappointing, just remove the villain tag and darth in the title if you want to continue your good guy mc, why not make him jedi? its misleading tbh, I want real sith mc that's what I came for, not some pretender and mc misunderstood novel
Vandalizer:An antihero is a main character in a literary work who does not exhibit traditional heroic qualities such as bravery or honesty, but instead, can be described as ordinary or even display unappealing qualities such as dishonesty. In the Disney movie, The Emperor’s New Groove, the main character, Kuzco, can be seen as an antihero because he displays negative qualities such as greed. The use of an antihero as the protagonist in a literary work can serve several important purposes. By including a main character with flaws, it creates a more realistic main character. It also allows for the character to exhibit growth if he or she overcomes these flaws. For example, To continue with Kuzco from The Emperor’s New Groove, by having him display characteristics such as greed and selfishness, it allows for him to learn the errors of his ways and become a better person.
Why label him as a 'villain' when he's more like an anti-hero? It seems like you're hinting that he'll eventually overcome his 'flaws,' which are what make him 'bad.' In that case, maybe calling him a Jedi or a Grey Jedi would make more sense. Or maybe I'm just not getting it (haven't read it, not sure if I will, but just throwing this out there)
Vandalizer:An antihero is a main character in a literary work who does not exhibit traditional heroic qualities such as bravery or honesty, but instead, can be described as ordinary or even display unappealing qualities such as dishonesty. In the Disney movie, The Emperor’s New Groove, the main character, Kuzco, can be seen as an antihero because he displays negative qualities such as greed. The use of an antihero as the protagonist in a literary work can serve several important purposes. By including a main character with flaws, it creates a more realistic main character. It also allows for the character to exhibit growth if he or she overcomes these flaws. For example, To continue with Kuzco from The Emperor’s New Groove, by having him display characteristics such as greed and selfishness, it allows for him to learn the errors of his ways and become a better person.
Does he become a True Sith?
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He becomes a bipolar psychopath
Infinite_Shadow_57:Does he become a True Sith?
Disappointing. Thanks m8
Bloodicys:He becomes a bipolar psychopath
I felt that but try playing smuggler cause then you really have a lot of leeway with your choices.
RuberDF:I don’t know SWOTOR but when I was playing KOTOR the choices were too much Black and White
So, what you’re saying is, he should act like a pragmatic and reasonable Sith like the “Light Side” path for the Sith characters in SWtO and use the Force to his own advantage. In other words, you’re highlighting why the complaints are right.
Vandalizer:*spoiler alert**spoiler alert* Dear Reader, I want to share some additional information about my character and plot. Hassan, is in a situation where he does not possess the knowledge and skills necessary to pilot spaceships, and he is in a different universe where the rules and conditions are different from his usual reality. Instead, he decides to use his intelligence and resources to find other ways to accomplish his goals, including obtaining ransom and finding potential allies in the Jedi council. In this way, his character is more anti-hero than villain, and it is his intentions and moral dilemmas that give the story additional layers of depth. He also decides to let Tann live so that she can be his assistant in controlling the spaceship and holonet. I hope these additional details have helped clarify my character's personality and motivations. Thank you for your support and interest in my story, and I look forward to your continued participation and questions!
