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JohnnyReever
JohnnyReeverLv51yr
2023-10-01 18:58

My honest opinion so far. The title can be majorly misleadin . This guy is not a true sith, unless he slowly evolves into one. Writing quality is good. One of the few fics on this app that you don’t have to spend time wondering what the author actually meant. Him simping over some girl he just met (Shakti) was majorly off puttin . I don’t know if it was meant as a comedic factor or not. But it brings the characters sanity into question and the way he acts is irritatin . Sure he is a guy that got dropped in the scenario impromptu. But the way he acts throws you off. If he is pretending to be a Sith. Then act the part. Or just go with the grey force user , that might turn to the dark side in the future. Another gripe I have is the lack of world knowledge being used . A glaring example was implying slave one was a defenceless shuttle.

Star Wars: Darth Hassan

Vandalizer
4.3
32 Chs

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Bloodicys
BloodicysLv4

Trash fic with misleading title. MC doesn’t deserve to be called a Darth, he’s a sith pretender. He forced Boba Fett to pay a mechanic that tried to steal their ship after fixing it. When we finally got to see him act like a real sith for once by beating up and torturing a sith girl that mocked and tried to kill him he throws it all down the drain by getting ashamed of his actions under the disappointed and dissatisfied gaze of a JEDI WOMAN. He kept the sith girl alive and wasted a high grade healing potion on her because he FELT responsible for her and also to appease Shaak Ti’s dissatisfication. Shaak Ti simp. (Already has a force bond with her) He calls himself a Darth yet he plans to spare the sith girl a second time if she tries to kill him, fowking clown. All his threats, plans and acting like a cold pragmatic sith is fake which is evident when Shaaki Ti reads his TRUE feelings through their force bond. He acts like a tsundere bwch. The fic would have been good if he didn’t call himself a sith a lord. Misleading title, fake sith, fake darth and simp tsundere mc.

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DaoistHGUhHf
DaoistHGUhHfLv1

Darth henpecked ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎ ︎︎

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Biraemen
BiraemenLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

This novel is like a summer TV series for me. You know, the man is the mafia (but he doesn't want to be the mafia, ask him, he is the mafia), and there is the girl (the girl is also very, very good-hearted). The girl and the boy fall in love and the girl tries to set the boy on a good path. They both act meaninglessly and revolve around each other constantly. MC calls himself darts, but he never serves the dark side. Kendiai isn't exactly Jedida. but he could describe himself as a neutral user of power. so the jedi wouldn't turn on him. But no, he wanted to be seen as the first Sith when not a single Sith had been seen for almost a thousand years. Frankly, it didn't interest me.

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Lossutra
LossutraLv4

Although, the grammar is quite good I can't rate it any higher than a 3.6 because for one the protagonist is actually a simp and two he isn't really a "Darth". Like bro actually healed the girl who tried to kill him and fix her image of him. How does that make any sense?

1yr
Yuna_sama
Yuna_samaLv5

I don’t understand the low star reviews it’s a great fanfic.

1yr
Just_Programmer
Just_ProgrammerLv3

С русского переводят на англ ес че, так что можно почитать загуглив название на русском.

1yr
AllSeeingBedroom
AllSeeingBedroomLv4

Writing and grammar is fine but the story started interesting but got boring after a few chapters so over all mid................................................................

1yr
Vandalizer
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