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Is Rhaella going to be the mistress? Ngl, I thought it would be Kinvara, but this works. Having Targ women only so no other house gains power and a dragon like the Velaryons from the dance. Thanks for the chapter.
You can’t be serious
From SBS 56: O: Ah, right. Now that you mention it, she's 139, isn't she? Well, if we say that the limit for a normal person is 140 years, she's still superhuman, in the sense that she goes beyond other people. So she'll be fine. Also, old people who will die in a year do not walk around in the snow with bare midriffs.
They were gambling on the fact that he couldn’t use it because of his fear of going blind. Safe to say they bet wrong. (They talked about it in the previous chapter or the one before it).
I noticed you described his eyes as violet in one of the early paragraphs where he’s gazing at his men. You might wanna fix that lol
Are his eyes changing colors because of his DF?
He tries to act cold and aloof, complaining about other people making decisions for him and invading his personal space, yet he allows them to do so. He mostly goes with the flow and ends up joining Luffy's crew. He's nothing but a tsundere bwch.
Everything about this is peak. I’d give it 5 stars, but I’m not a fan of flashbacks. Honestly, it would’ve been better if you started from his childhood up to now instesd of introducing stuff via flashbacks, but that’s just my personal opinion.