There are simply a lot of frustrating things, the MC is very weak and a hostage, I'm still in the first mission chapter, and it's simply frustrating that he acts so emotionally, simply idiotic.He knows he is weak, and practically useless without a heroic spirit, if time runs out he becomes more useless than he already is, he will be easily captured, besides those S+ gifts he received? Where did they go? Any place? Simply edit that chapter and remove that information.
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LIKEbrah iIcan tell you now your story will never get that far you will just drop it and it makes the gifts redundant and useless. very poor storytelling choices
Then why use fate heroes as powerbase? People expect powers from fate universe heroic spirits = relatively op mc Not a weak hostage
u literally gave him c rank stats in the first f*king chapter!!! since u don't seem to realize what that means, lets give u an example! if ur mc went to marvel he could clap all the avengers except the hulk and thor!!! and with all the things u put him through, there no way he would be weak minded at all!!! and u completely messed up the personality of someone who went though all that!!! with the way u had made it, then by chapter 3 he should of resembled f*king sasuke emo as*!!!!
man this is called a story don't worry this is one of the good ones naruto wasn't the strongest mentally from the start sasuke stayed imperfect our hopes are placed on imperfects but people create so perfect characters that it leaves no difference just diff starting power and common list of wives etc
it's not the point smart@ss , mc has the power of fate heroic spirits ... go search about them, even in Cannon a single heroic spirit is op af so readers expect at least somewhat strong mc when authors use powers of heroic spirits from FATe ... at least try to understand what others are saying before trying to act like a Twitter weirdo
Most heroic spirits ain't op.
Most Heroic Spirits could only beat street tier characters. That's because Dc power gap is just that big. Only some High Level servants with tricky NP and Grand Servants would be capable to match the lower High Tiers in Dc
are u sure. he is physically and mentally a normal person.
Just throwing it out there but a heroic spirit with a C rank in any stat is pretty decent. Even high level magus in Fate have their highest stat (magic) at most be an F+ or an E-. So basic human with C in any stat would pretty much steamroll most low to mid tier villains (most of Batman's roster) and could literally turn most generic thugs into a creamy meat paste with a basic punch
I agree with you, the author doesn't seem to understand the meaning and magnitude of C rank stats for example, this is archer emiyas stats in the fifth Grail war: Strength: D Endurance:C Agility: C Mana:B Luck:E NP:? Emiya (Archer) could go blow for blow against a Cu Chullain, granted he was ordered to just scout the area in their first meeting, but the fight in the church was against a serious Cu, that if it wasn't emiya (Archer) and his BS Noble Phantasm he would be dead, so yeah either the author doesn't know or author just doesn't care about the fate power scaling and just wants to pigeon hole the MC to join the Young Justice team, or whatever it is, cuz I already dropped this a long time ago cuz of the above reason.