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BlackFox_Memorys
BlackFox_MemorysLv111yr
2023-11-22 21:47

There are simply a lot of frustrating things, the MC is very weak and a hostage, I'm still in the first mission chapter, and it's simply frustrating that he acts so emotionally, simply idiotic.He knows he is weak, and practically useless without a heroic spirit, if time runs out he becomes more useless than he already is, he will be easily captured, besides those S+ gifts he received? Where did they go? Any place? Simply edit that chapter and remove that information.

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BlackFox_Memorys
BlackFox_MemorysLv11

SSS

Gilgamesh9669
Gilgamesh9669Author

They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag

BlackFox_Memorys:SSS
Koloja
KolojaLv2

Brother, you posted this in the wrong place😬

Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
Tiktark
TiktarkLv14

are his stats human based or servant based?

Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
Bishop_Briggs_7707
Bishop_Briggs_7707Lv14

brah iIcan tell you now your story will never get that far you will just drop it and it makes the gifts redundant and useless. very poor storytelling choices

Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

Then why use fate heroes as powerbase? People expect powers from fate universe heroic spirits = relatively op mc Not a weak hostage

Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
Monsieur_Dreamer
Monsieur_DreamerLv3

I'm not surprised that a lot of people automatically hates on a story if the MC is not overpowered in the beginning. Peak Brainrot.

sean_robbins
sean_robbinsLv2

u literally gave him c rank stats in the first f*king chapter!!! since u don't seem to realize what that means, lets give u an example! if ur mc went to marvel he could clap all the avengers except the hulk and thor!!! and with all the things u put him through, there no way he would be weak minded at all!!! and u completely messed up the personality of someone who went though all that!!! with the way u had made it, then by chapter 3 he should of resembled f*king sasuke emo as*!!!!

Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
Gamer_Tricker
Gamer_TrickerLv4

man this is called a story don't worry this is one of the good ones naruto wasn't the strongest mentally from the start sasuke stayed imperfect our hopes are placed on imperfects but people create so perfect characters that it leaves no difference just diff starting power and common list of wives etc

Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

it's not the point smart@ss , mc has the power of fate heroic spirits ... go search about them, even in Cannon a single heroic spirit is op af so readers expect at least somewhat strong mc when authors use powers of heroic spirits from FATe ... at least try to understand what others are saying before trying to act like a Twitter weirdo

Monsieur_Dreamer:I'm not surprised that a lot of people automatically hates on a story if the MC is not overpowered in the beginning. Peak Brainrot.
Linus279
Linus279Lv4

Most heroic spirits ain't op.

Deadrule_vivek:it's not the point smart@ss , mc has the power of fate heroic spirits ... go search about them, even in Cannon a single heroic spirit is op af so readers expect at least somewhat strong mc when authors use powers of heroic spirits from FATe ... at least try to understand what others are saying before trying to act like a Twitter weirdo
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

in dc initial power level if you don't include cosmic characters ? then yes they are ... but read the fanfic before trying to act smart here

Linus279:Most heroic spirits ain't op.
Linus279
Linus279Lv4

Most Heroic Spirits could only beat street tier characters. That's because Dc power gap is just that big. Only some High Level servants with tricky NP and Grand Servants would be capable to match the lower High Tiers in Dc

Deadrule_vivek:in dc initial power level if you don't include cosmic characters ? then yes they are ... but read the fanfic before trying to act smart here
Cosmic_Nova
Cosmic_NovaLv4

are u sure. he is physically and mentally a normal person.

Gilgamesh9669:They were all used to Save his life, As for the mc being weak, well, that's just how it will be, this isn't an OP mentally strong mc, he will eventually get there, but not at the start this is why it doesn't have Overpowered tag
DadguyDave
DadguyDaveLv14

Just throwing it out there but a heroic spirit with a C rank in any stat is pretty decent. Even high level magus in Fate have their highest stat (magic) at most be an F+ or an E-. So basic human with C in any stat would pretty much steamroll most low to mid tier villains (most of Batman's roster) and could literally turn most generic thugs into a creamy meat paste with a basic punch

Felixxx
FelixxxLv3

I agree with you, the author doesn't seem to understand the meaning and magnitude of C rank stats for example, this is archer emiyas stats in the fifth Grail war: Strength: D Endurance:C Agility: C Mana:B Luck:E NP:? Emiya (Archer) could go blow for blow against a Cu Chullain, granted he was ordered to just scout the area in their first meeting, but the fight in the church was against a serious Cu, that if it wasn't emiya (Archer) and his BS Noble Phantasm he would be dead, so yeah either the author doesn't know or author just doesn't care about the fate power scaling and just wants to pigeon hole the MC to join the Young Justice team, or whatever it is, cuz I already dropped this a long time ago cuz of the above reason.

sean_robbins:u literally gave him c rank stats in the first f*king chapter!!! since u don't seem to realize what that means, lets give u an example! if ur mc went to marvel he could clap all the avengers except the hulk and thor!!! and with all the things u put him through, there no way he would be weak minded at all!!! and u completely messed up the personality of someone who went though all that!!! with the way u had made it, then by chapter 3 he should of resembled f*king sasuke emo as*!!!!
Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1

Ya explicaron varias veces que las estadísticas de fate son algo así: F: un humano corriente E: dies veces más fuerte que un humano D: dies veces más fuerte que el rango E C:dies veces más fuerte que el rango D B: un héroe serio, esto ya está al nivel de artoria, podría ganarle una batalla a súperman, es un asunto serio. A: los héroes aquí, son como karma, Siegfried, Artoria, Gilgamesh, scathhatch, ozimandias, bestias, que no tienen comparación en exepto individuos igual de OP, son monstruos absolutos, cada uno de ellos, con la capacidad de superar a la liga de la justicia en solitario, algunos simplemente no pueden ser derrotados, como Hércules, que podría aplastar a Superman contra el suelo en fuerza, y si dicen que Hércules no puede destruir el mundo de un puñetazo y Superman si, solo recuerda que todos los héroes de fate son seres mágicos completos, Superman está en desventaja elemental contra todos ellos, en fin, un héroe con fuerza C, es al menos 100 veces más fuerte que un humano, y en DC, humano es la norma, pues Batman, sería como maximo 5 o 10 veces más fuerte que un humano, y las estadísticas básicas son lo mínimo que se tiene en cuenta, pues con un fantasma noble, incluso un individuo de relativamente bajo rango, podría acabar a Superman fácilmente, como ejemplo, Hassan, su habilidad podría arrancar el corazón de Superman, e incluso la mujer maravilla, con bastante facilidad, y creo que ese tipo solo es rango B, a lo mucho... En fin, con estadísticas en C, hay poco entre los villanos comunes capaces de ganarle al mc de esta historia, pero tipos como grundy y Doomsday, se lo papean, pero con fantasmas nobles adecuados, mc puede papearse a Superman.

Felixxx:I agree with you, the author doesn't seem to understand the meaning and magnitude of C rank stats for example, this is archer emiyas stats in the fifth Grail war: Strength: D Endurance:C Agility: C Mana:B Luck:E NP:? Emiya (Archer) could go blow for blow against a Cu Chullain, granted he was ordered to just scout the area in their first meeting, but the fight in the church was against a serious Cu, that if it wasn't emiya (Archer) and his BS Noble Phantasm he would be dead, so yeah either the author doesn't know or author just doesn't care about the fate power scaling and just wants to pigeon hole the MC to join the Young Justice team, or whatever it is, cuz I already dropped this a long time ago cuz of the above reason.
Felixxx
FelixxxLv3

Es cierto jajaja, el autor solo está nerfeando al MC jajaja

Braian_Rodriguez:Ya explicaron varias veces que las estadísticas de fate son algo así: F: un humano corriente E: dies veces más fuerte que un humano D: dies veces más fuerte que el rango E C:dies veces más fuerte que el rango D B: un héroe serio, esto ya está al nivel de artoria, podría ganarle una batalla a súperman, es un asunto serio. A: los héroes aquí, son como karma, Siegfried, Artoria, Gilgamesh, scathhatch, ozimandias, bestias, que no tienen comparación en exepto individuos igual de OP, son monstruos absolutos, cada uno de ellos, con la capacidad de superar a la liga de la justicia en solitario, algunos simplemente no pueden ser derrotados, como Hércules, que podría aplastar a Superman contra el suelo en fuerza, y si dicen que Hércules no puede destruir el mundo de un puñetazo y Superman si, solo recuerda que todos los héroes de fate son seres mágicos completos, Superman está en desventaja elemental contra todos ellos, en fin, un héroe con fuerza C, es al menos 100 veces más fuerte que un humano, y en DC, humano es la norma, pues Batman, sería como maximo 5 o 10 veces más fuerte que un humano, y las estadísticas básicas son lo mínimo que se tiene en cuenta, pues con un fantasma noble, incluso un individuo de relativamente bajo rango, podría acabar a Superman fácilmente, como ejemplo, Hassan, su habilidad podría arrancar el corazón de Superman, e incluso la mujer maravilla, con bastante facilidad, y creo que ese tipo solo es rango B, a lo mucho... En fin, con estadísticas en C, hay poco entre los villanos comunes capaces de ganarle al mc de esta historia, pero tipos como grundy y Doomsday, se lo papean, pero con fantasmas nobles adecuados, mc puede papearse a Superman.
Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1

Todavía no leí la historia, pero con las estadísticas en C, mc solo necesita un golpe para enviar al otro barrio, a prácticamente todos los villanos de grado "Humano" de DC, como el Joker, Harley, capitán frío, Death stroke, he incluso villanos fuertes, como reverse flash, mueren si reciben un golpe bien colocado, 100 veces la fuerza de un humano, es equiparable a 5 toneladas de fuerza bruta, en estado base, no hay muchos que le ganen a eso, y menos aún cuando alcanza rango B, y ese número es mínimo de 50 toneladas, podría enviar a spiderman a volar y levantar a rinno fácilmente, pero esto es DC, en DC, o eres humano, o eres un dios alienígena, como rango c, mc puede ganarle a todos los villanos humanos, pero requiere al menos grado A, si quiere ganarle a dioses como Wonderland woman, atom, red tornado, Superman, Kara, Salomón grundy, etc, pero con fantasmas nobles especiales, ganarle a estos tipos tampoco es tan difícil, los seres realmente difíciles son dark said, Wonder woman, doctor Fate, Zeus, Doomsday...etc, exepto fantasmas muy específicos, ganarle a estos tipos podría ser complicado, muy complicado... Requiere al menos estadísticas en A, o incluso A++, sumado a artefactos adecuados, como ninelives, solo para tener una oportunidad igualada, con una mayor oportunidad de perder, pero si, con estadísticas en EX+++, la estadística máxima de fate, destruir el planeta no es difícil, es difícil evitar destruir el planeta al ponerse serio, pues incluso el jefe final de grand orden, goetia, apenas tenía algunas estadísticas en EX, y ya podía barrer el tablero con una mano en la espalda, y mientras se contenía, imagínate.

Felixxx:Es cierto jajaja, el autor solo está nerfeando al MC jajaja
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