BlackFox_Memorys

Honestly, I don't mind the use of legendary Pokémon, but so quickly? And with Pokémon that aren't fully evolved, it feels strange, the way it was written... It makes it seem like it was very easy.

Thanks for the warning, it might be good, but I don't like Rosalie, so I'll avoid reading it.

I read a few chapters of the original, and the translator is actually very competent; it's very difficult to read it in the original.

Honestly, up until chapters 12 and 13, it was truly a great fanfic, but after that, I can't read it anymore because the author took a turn for such a terrible development. Finally, good luck to whoever reads this, and to the author who wrote these two crappy chapters after 11 great ones, this garbage isn't for me.

Can you tell me the original name, please?

So, I didn't understand either. If he wants to create an original story, he should use an original title, not take it from something that already exists.

Did you write it yourself, or is it a translation?

That's not for me, I don't like betrayal.

I know it's very late to say this, but I hope Daddy Mahoraga is present.

It definitely must be, I tried to find the original title and couldn't, if you find it please let me know.