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u know its one thing to summon archer, but if ur going to keep summoning more servants then this will go down hill fast!
lol so the sword can't be summoned as a saber huh?! 🤣
it does say in most cases...
in japan, for most classes, students stay in the same room and its the teachers that go to different classrooms to teach! though things like home ec or gym obviously requires them to go to leave there classrooms!
so he examined her panties huh!!!
nah! she's just taking a nap in the basement like the lazy bum she is! i mean seriously!!! who decides to sleep for thousands of years just so there mentality doesn't grow just so they can stay childish forever?!?!?!?!
i didn't forget, it was just really late when i wrote this and figuring out how to spell was the least of my concerns
as a god of magic, he should be able to easily use it to make sure he doesn't get them nocked up!!
... how?!?!?!
how could u forget alphed?!
thats... more of a personal/biased opinion in all honesty. felt like they were trying to make him into being a douche just for the sake of it and it annoyed me! not to be rude but i generally like ur stories! and then it felt like someone took a crayon to it... but yeah i gave it 1 star at the time because i was really frustrated. if i could i'd probably go back and change it 3 stars or so because it wasn't that bad
if i had to say anything then i feel like the best would be to slow down? it felt more like u were trying to cram everything in without really explaining anything. like when ur guy first died, i in all honesty can't really tell how! all there is, is he's hammering away, then theres a sword in his heart! i'm guessing there was an explosion or something? but i don't really know?! so yeah it felt like u crammed two or more paragraphs together and left out the contexts!
there cheaper there though
lol so instead of cutting off her hand she used magic to burn or melt the the flesh off her hand?! thats sounds so much worse!!!!!!!
lol put her thong in a display case and hang it in her shrine! that way she can see it when she comes back down!!!! 🤣
doesn't she have adamantium bones from wolverine?!?!
but so is doctor fate, so...