The idea is good but the execution is bad. Actually the fic started off well, I read a few episodes and I didn't understand why they rated it so low, but then it went downhill after the episode with the Justice League came. MC is very pure and honest for a reincarnator who was experimented on in the laboratory. And this makes the fic pointless in my opinion. After suffering so much, a person does not trust everyone easily and does not want to play hero with them. Anyway, I ignored this error and continued reading. Then I encountered a logical error again. While Artemis and our MC were fighting, MC was defeated by Artemis. MC physical stats are C level and he is at least as strong as Spider-Man. Not only his strength but also its other features such as speed and durability are at C level. A normal person is F level in fate statistics. In FGO, Bedivere was human and several of his stats are F rank. Now, would you believe this if I told you when the MC with C level stats lost to Artemis, who has E level stats? If MC stood where he was and Artemis punched and kicked him repeatedly, nothing would happen to MC. Anyway, the idea is good, but the execution is very bad. It's a readable fic if you don't pay too much attention to logical errors. My score for this is 3.4 (translated by Google translate)
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Trusting the League was important, cause he needed them to trust him, he literally had nowhere to go, all his family is dead, and he didn't even know how to control his powers, of course he was going to team up with the league, as for C rank powers, i think you missed the part where it's explained, His body only becomes C Rank when his about to transform, to help the transformation go smoothly, his actual physical stats are that of a normal Human, at least at that part of the story
You are just trying to justify your plot hole that you dug yourself into
What Plot hole?
I am just curious, why even do this? keep the stats low from the start. the guy doesn't have to be overpowered, he just has to be written well. this whole thing was confusing because it wasn't fleshed out properly. the details and explanations felt very ambiguous. why does he have a normal body when he is not transforming? if the enhanced stats work only while transforming, how is this any different from the transformed stats? why is it considered separately? the questions keep piling up.
for me it's mostly the scaling of him to the enemies he really strong in the beginning and he only gets stronger from there well sort of but he just thrown around all the time facing off stronger enemies after stronger enemy nothing different that and him training for the next one to show up author you do no there's other aspects to DC then that right but ultimately really what it all boils down to is it's just repeats it's self constantly a one and half trick pony if you will
he didn't even try and look for options first
the whole thing
It sounds like you just don’t like the idea of the me being a hero period. Ultimately, the Mc being a hero seems like a logical conclusion when you consider the fact that he needs protection from the light and training for his powers. The other thing to keep in mind is the distrust of the league. They were going to attempt controlling his actions regardless of him joining from the way they treat super boy. Yes, they sympathize with him, but if he went out on his own he would do poorly in the world considering his circumstances and morals. Do I believe he put up with them a bit to much? Yes, I do, but I understand the decision to accumulate a base set of abilities before being left to the machinations of every organization in the world.
