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2023-09-22 12:35

Indeed, there has been some similarity in business direction of the cn novel and this novel(like that both started arcade) but I can see that this novel's plot is different. And I don't really see that as copy since even Nintendo have arcade business, in fact, their arcade business came first than their famicom or NES. I also liked that the mc has a story background and not with a dull and perfect family that will follow all his will, that's simply wishful thinking. The characters isn't like the character that looked down on arcades too much even though it's not initially profitable. Unlike the characters at the cn novel this novel is inspired that looked down and doesn't even believe the arcade business will not go well even though super mario bros is generally an interesting and noble idea and game in that year, this novel characters saw the opportunity of the arcades, and wanted to take profit from it. Except for the arrogant and dumb son of the general manager of Ikeburo, that initially scoffed at the potential of tthe arcade machines of the mc's, the characters reacted fine. But the son of general manager also came to know his mistakes even though he denied it, he's not too arrogant and too dumb even though he's still dumb though, for making a competent employee to resign. It's not cringe face slapping as you may expected it, read it for yourself. The writing is good as well. Probably with the help of an AI, but who isn't using AI now in this platform? Even royalroad authors used AI. This is probably the only way for an independent author without editor so I'm not complaining. It's great even. World background, the world is parallel world 1990. That lacked video games with the exception of Pong and Tetris. The mc will recreate his previous life's games into his new world. Character design. The mc was named Math Algebra... Who would name their child that? Probably only Elon Musk will name someone that... While making the name into a code like encryption. He transmigrated into Shinro Suzuki. Now he has a new and normal Japanese name. Shin was born into a wealthy family. And his father is quite strict. Well, some parts of Asia, there is always a strict parents. Mira the FL, probably inspired from that cn novel this novel is inspired from, was a young woman, first year in computer engineering. Her personality is kind of like Chinese girls, kind of a tsundere and supporting of the mc, but hey, Asians, especially in Japan, Korea or chinese girls have that kind of personality with them. Anime girls that is tsundere, or the person that doesn't want to admit her feelings. So it's not about in race, it's about that most girls is like that. Doesn't want to say their true feelings. Basically, they're hard to understand. Updating stability was great.

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Sonu_Siraj_5546
Sonu_Siraj_5546Lv13

is this harem or single fl? the tom fanfic was recommended by my friend and told me that it was transmigrate by original author . so if you readen this novel so can you tell me ?

iceclaw9113
iceclaw9113Lv12

It depends. I also like reading some few harem book as a reader, but its different if I'm the author. 😮‍💨 But let's see. Let's just go with the flow 😅

Sonu_Siraj_5546:is this harem or single fl? the tom fanfic was recommended by my friend and told me that it was transmigrate by original author . so if you readen this novel so can you tell me ?
RenegadeForLife
RenegadeForLifeLv14

Does the story ever explain his name? Is there a reason for it or did the author really just think Math Algebra was a name?

Fazle_Rabbi_5750
Fazle_Rabbi_5750Lv13

author have you finished rewriting it? and if you have where is it?

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Yue_021
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Binged around 150 Chaps all night before stopping. It was very good at first but then the plot becomes repetitive and the pacing became too fast which robbed that good experience I felt in the early chaps.If I have if honest I truly enjoyed the so called 'filler' slife of life chapters you stopped making after a certain point, its gives depth to the character and could have been another plot point to avoid the repetitiveness of the business side. Like you could have explored Mira's life in college and how her relationship with the mc impacted her life there. The reactions of the classmates? How did the treatment of her change when he donated a sum of money to the school? Perhaps you can have some male student attempt to 'flirt' her and how she rejects it and then follwed by the mc showing him that she is his. There is a lot of aspects in his relationship with not only with Mira but also her parents, her sister, his sisters, and etc. There's a lot of plotpoint that could have been explored. These things had a lot of potential that would give depth to your characters. Making them more relatable and easy to sympathize with. But we barely get any of it and then at certain point completely stopped it.There also the problem where you repeatedly told a scene instead of showing it. Like they said "Show not Tell". You did it right with the buying of the marriage ring. You showed us, instead of just saying "He bought an elegant ring" and leave it at that.I believe it was a bad move when you stopped making the so called 'filler' slice-of-slife chaps after the marriage chapter. Those where the things that I enjoyed and helped avoid the reptitiveness of the business side. So much potential but was not explored.Hope this helps you improve author. I geniunely enjoyed reading this book.

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