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Kenrio
KenrioLv111yr
2023-09-20 02:54

This is translation right? Because if not, this is literally a copy paste of a Chinese novel. And tour excuse how it will become diferent from the original is pretty trash, you should simple not copy paste from the begining

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NewComer714
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Did you read the description carefully? Or have you read the Chinese novel that inspired it? There are significant differences between this novel and that one, although there are similarities. Before you label it as a copy-paste, it has its own unique plot. In the Chinese novel, the world essentially lacks games altogether, The CN MC didn't face significant initial struggles and enjoyed support from his family, along with connections and resources, while in this novel, the MC lacks family support and even has to contend with the challenge of raising funds from scratch, and also the world have slight difference, the Tetris and other game was already created early in this novel's world, so there were pre-existing games, the explanation for the almost non-existent gaming industry in this novel's world will be provided in future chapters. Before jumping to conclusions in your review, it would have been better to wait for more chapters. The Chinese novel one didn't emphasize character interactions and instead focused extensively on the reactions of external characters. In contrast, this novel will explore character development within the MC's family, among side characters, and in terms of business growth. Unlike the Chinese novel, where the MC identifies solely as a player or gamer and centers all attention on game development or its related aspects, this novel takes a broader approach.

Reverse_9612
Reverse_9612Lv2

I have read the mtl novel one this novel is inspired from, but this novel and that one is different.The only similarity between this one and that novel is the business direction. Both mc started in arcades.and of course the girl beside him seemed to take inspiration from that Chinese novel too, but besides that, it's different. I actually like this novel compared to the Chinese novel but I don't know if this novel will continuesly updates with more chapters or it will drop, thats's the only thing that worries me.

Medas_Morningstar
Medas_MorningstarLv4

sadly game developer novels are either poorly excited .or dropped with just very few is good

Reverse_9612:I have read the mtl novel one this novel is inspired from, but this novel and that one is different.The only similarity between this one and that novel is the business direction. Both mc started in arcades.and of course the girl beside him seemed to take inspiration from that Chinese novel too, but besides that, it's different. I actually like this novel compared to the Chinese novel but I don't know if this novel will continuesly updates with more chapters or it will drop, thats's the only thing that worries me.
Lord_Hastur
Lord_HasturLv5

harem???

NewComer714:Did you read the description carefully? Or have you read the Chinese novel that inspired it? There are significant differences between this novel and that one, although there are similarities. Before you label it as a copy-paste, it has its own unique plot. In the Chinese novel, the world essentially lacks games altogether, The CN MC didn't face significant initial struggles and enjoyed support from his family, along with connections and resources, while in this novel, the MC lacks family support and even has to contend with the challenge of raising funds from scratch, and also the world have slight difference, the Tetris and other game was already created early in this novel's world, so there were pre-existing games, the explanation for the almost non-existent gaming industry in this novel's world will be provided in future chapters. Before jumping to conclusions in your review, it would have been better to wait for more chapters. The Chinese novel one didn't emphasize character interactions and instead focused extensively on the reactions of external characters. In contrast, this novel will explore character development within the MC's family, among side characters, and in terms of business growth. Unlike the Chinese novel, where the MC identifies solely as a player or gamer and centers all attention on game development or its related aspects, this novel takes a broader approach.
Kenz6y1
Kenz6y1Lv13

Dropped?

NewComer714:Did you read the description carefully? Or have you read the Chinese novel that inspired it? There are significant differences between this novel and that one, although there are similarities. Before you label it as a copy-paste, it has its own unique plot. In the Chinese novel, the world essentially lacks games altogether, The CN MC didn't face significant initial struggles and enjoyed support from his family, along with connections and resources, while in this novel, the MC lacks family support and even has to contend with the challenge of raising funds from scratch, and also the world have slight difference, the Tetris and other game was already created early in this novel's world, so there were pre-existing games, the explanation for the almost non-existent gaming industry in this novel's world will be provided in future chapters. Before jumping to conclusions in your review, it would have been better to wait for more chapters. The Chinese novel one didn't emphasize character interactions and instead focused extensively on the reactions of external characters. In contrast, this novel will explore character development within the MC's family, among side characters, and in terms of business growth. Unlike the Chinese novel, where the MC identifies solely as a player or gamer and centers all attention on game development or its related aspects, this novel takes a broader approach.
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Binged around 150 Chaps all night before stopping. It was very good at first but then the plot becomes repetitive and the pacing became too fast which robbed that good experience I felt in the early chaps.If I have if honest I truly enjoyed the so called 'filler' slife of life chapters you stopped making after a certain point, its gives depth to the character and could have been another plot point to avoid the repetitiveness of the business side. Like you could have explored Mira's life in college and how her relationship with the mc impacted her life there. The reactions of the classmates? How did the treatment of her change when he donated a sum of money to the school? Perhaps you can have some male student attempt to 'flirt' her and how she rejects it and then follwed by the mc showing him that she is his. There is a lot of aspects in his relationship with not only with Mira but also her parents, her sister, his sisters, and etc. There's a lot of plotpoint that could have been explored. These things had a lot of potential that would give depth to your characters. Making them more relatable and easy to sympathize with. But we barely get any of it and then at certain point completely stopped it.There also the problem where you repeatedly told a scene instead of showing it. Like they said "Show not Tell". You did it right with the buying of the marriage ring. You showed us, instead of just saying "He bought an elegant ring" and leave it at that.I believe it was a bad move when you stopped making the so called 'filler' slice-of-slife chaps after the marriage chapter. Those where the things that I enjoyed and helped avoid the reptitiveness of the business side. So much potential but was not explored.Hope this helps you improve author. I geniunely enjoyed reading this book.

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