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funny_lolLv11yr
2024-01-25 19:09

I thought he would try to become stronger, but no, he does not train, does not test his body for strength at all, it is not clear why?! I thought he wouldn 't shoot everywhere , but would open his intelligence to know about everything, he has money but he doesn 't actually use it. Does it make sense to have a lot of money and guard it? Couldn't he have trained vampire hunters? He couldn't use money to change the Bible about himself?! it seems like a normal plot , but a lot of things are missing from where did the vampires come from ? Are there any magicians? Where are the werewolves? Vampires would hardly have appeared without magic! In short, does the author want to make hidden enemies for our gg? but where does he have enemies , what nonsense did the author come up with ? how much do I know at dusk vampires seem to take strength from blood so that it's nonsense that vampires burn from his blood))

The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Beans_on_a_tree
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132 Chs

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theanimemail
theanimemailLv10

I don't really get what you're trying to say, but it seems like most of those will likely be further explored once the MC travels to further out continents. Also, um, I don't think vampires and magic are synonymous with each other. Oh, and I don't think money can have that much of an effect on something as widespread as Catholicism and the many other religions based on the Bible. Side note: I have no idea what you're talking about when it comes to trying to become stronger; if he got any stronger than he already is, I could see him being way too OP for the story.

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Raventan
RaventanLv14

do you remember who send him here there are multiverse out there and mc knowing it and he just forget about it if i know for sure something higher place is really exist i will definitely try to reach it

theanimemail:I don't really get what you're trying to say, but it seems like most of those will likely be further explored once the MC travels to further out continents. Also, um, I don't think vampires and magic are synonymous with each other. Oh, and I don't think money can have that much of an effect on something as widespread as Catholicism and the many other religions based on the Bible. Side note: I have no idea what you're talking about when it comes to trying to become stronger; if he got any stronger than he already is, I could see him being way too OP for the story.
1yr
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theanimemail
theanimemailLv10

I mean, I guess? Though the MC doesn't really seem like he places that much importance stuff like power, social status, or anything really related. He also doesn't seem to have a temperament that is in line with trying to ascend higher.

Raventan:do you remember who send him here there are multiverse out there and mc knowing it and he just forget about it if i know for sure something higher place is really exist i will definitely try to reach it
1yr
Noxcy100
Noxcy100Lv13

Well this isn't a Shonen where the MC is constantly fighting for his life. The point is that he is constantly improving and shaping the world around him. Besides we've had enough OP characters

8mth
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SpeedyG
SpeedyGLv10

This story is awesome, is original and plot makes sense, right amount of time skip w/o leaving unexplained gaps. It keeps you engaged in every chapter...

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war777
war777Lv14

really excited to read more! one of the few twilight fanfic's that adds to the wold.

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Apollocus
ApollocusLv13

It's quite good even I like the set up at the start and he seems pretty realistic as a person. I saw some people saying that oh he has no ambition and why did he learn to fight only after fighting a vampire. Well it's plain and simple, he can't die and it isn't even the start of the original twilight series we are still in old times and right now he is just enjoying life and what is currently happening is just the set up. Now for the fighting, that was the first vampire he fought and everything before that he could just one shot since he can't die. Like you can't tell you need something until you experience failure that shows what needs to be improved and how you can improve your weaknesses. All in all very good and I want more chapters.

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mow
mowLv4

Not for me, the MC lacks ambition its just boring, dude spent over a thousand years doing nothing but living in tribes and did not even bother to learn any combat arts until after his first vampire fight. I honestly see no point in putting him this far before canon cuz he's doing nothing with his thousand years beside learning combat arts now and going around healing humans. If someone is this far back I expected some form of legacy being created like a Kingdom or a very strong Clan of descendants but nah its just yapping until canon finally arrives.

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TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv4

The author isn't lying when they say 'average writing'. The grammar is fine but expect inconsistencies and an incompetent and dumb MC. He hides from a vampire, a vampire that should be able to hear his heartbeat and smell him. After being alive for over a thousand years he states that he still doesn't know how to fight and only decides to learn after fighting and killing a vampire. He learns how to use weapons even though the only thing that can hurt a vampire is another vampire. So many other things but you get the point.

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Beans_on_a_tree
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What can I say? 😘 ----------------------

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Bad_news_83
Bad_news_83Lv3

Make Alice Cullen mc mate please if possible Alice Cullen mc mate Alice Cullen mc mate Alice Cullen Romantic mate for mc please Alice Cullen As mc wife please ?

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Valkorion_2003
Valkorion_2003Lv12

This story was so good that I couldn't stop and binged the whole thing in practically one go. Then I spent half an hour looking for something, anything like this to scratch the same itch and found nothing. It was torture. Amazing story, love the premise and the idea of the mc's small changes throughout history. The pacing is perfect. I can imagine that pacing would be the most difficult part of writing a story like this, one that covers such a long period of time but it was well done. I never felt bored. 10/10 would recommend!

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MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

OK AS A FAN THAT CAME LATE INTO THE STORY. START IN CHAPTER 12O..I LOVE THIS NOVEL IS A FUN READ..THE PLOT STORY IS FUN AND THE CHARACTER ARE FUN..I LOVE THE MC CHARACTER HIS FUN..ONE QUESTION WILL THE MC CREATE THE TECHNOLOGY TO TRAVEL TO OTHER PLANETS GALAXIES OR OTHER UNIVERSES AND WORLDS WHEN THE TWILIGHT STORY IS OVER . CMON AUTHOR THIS NOVEL HAS A LOT OF FUN POTENTIAL STORY..AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT THANK YOU.

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