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the author's armor is too thick, and in the world of magic, our hero behaves strangely, getting involved with someone who is supposed to die, constantly telling his mother things she shouldn't hear, being rude to his father as if he were the head of the household, and then crying about being turned into a monster. Why is all this happening?

it's too dramatic, it's a fanfiction, and the more seriously the author tries to do it, the worse it turns out. Chinese authors just do whatever they want, and our hero has everything, including money, but he tries to do everything himself like a child. I don't like drama, and I want to nerf the hero.

Everything was fine, but why did they need Uchiha because of the eyes? And why does Hugo need eyes for evolution? they are so advanced in the empire that they can clone these eyes , it looks disgusting to me , Obito is also suffering , what kind of nonsense is this ? There was already an empire there, and Obito had suffered for so many years? Why would that be? It was too unnecessary , but Naruto is really an idiot !

human federation .

It gets boring , I don't mind that she gets stronger , but I do mind that she fights. I still love her more as a technology genius than a fighter , why would she need extra strength? She could turn herself into an android and be the strongest , from the beginning she made technology interesting , but I don't I can understand Bulma, who is constantly training, how is she different from others? It would be better if she completely changed the whole earth and made it the center of the universe , and became the empress of the universe ! So what 's the point of it ? It would be better if she made wishes that all the scientists of the earth would unite into a human federation .

No, it shows that the system is weak))) but if there is a normal system or serum for gene changes, then it works very easily, but I understood that the author did a special job to show how hard everything gets for him, it's understandable, but it's also understandable that this was specially done ! I read fanfiction to make the plot easier, but the author makes it more realistic, such authors often tell the child not to study, his body is not ready, but this is not our world, this is a world with a chakra that is not like ours in reality)) but for me, the only drawback is so strong, it's too long a plot, and in this plot, in fact

of course, I understood this , that 's why I'm writing , it 's obviously artificial , like a strong civilization , but they show us in the plot that it couldn 't save a person !

A strong civilization has existed for I don 't know how long , but the strongest technologies couldn 't save Kushina ? Is the author mocking you? such a civilization should almost bring back the dead , but they couldn 't cure a living person ? Give her energy? It immediately ruined my mood! it immediately showed that civilization is weak , although it can change dna . In short , nonsense !

it wouldn't have worked either, they don't have an education, the nobles have been making them stupid for 1000 years, they need brains to rule the empire, but they couldn't rule the village, and it seems to me it all started with 6 ways why did he choose asura? although he was not educated himself , he just did as he wanted and everything was without logic ! or maybe the other way around with logic, who knows what he was up to since he was watching the world))

And it 's not that simple there. The 2nd hokage had no right to transfer the position of hokage to the 3rd hokage , it seems like all clans should choose there !