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I respect that. He has ambitions that are still rooted in humanity

Enhancement is one of the most op skills I've seen in a while. the applications are endless. He could just enhance someone's suicidal tendency, their fear. and much more. As an outer god enhancing things like his own will or his dominion over the world will prove important later on.

This book is a work of literary art. The characters and world building are nothing short of phenomenal I've never felt so deeply about a character in such a short time. 2 chapters, that's all it took to keep me craving more. I hope this book reaches as many people as possible. This is the best iteration of an immortal I've seen in forever.

Contingencies for contingencies aren't enough. Another layer of two will do. 🤣

This whole reveal and co-op was immaculate 🙇

3 cheers to caffeine and here are 3 powerstones for motivation

Definitely writing gold. I find it impressive how well you wrote a character and made them feel whole in just two chapters. This chapter alone proves how skilled and passionate you are about your work. I could never do the same.

This is my first novel. I don't have much to say, but I plan to see this through. It will take a while before we get through my whole outline for the novel. So there's a lot of content heading your way

he'll improve. he's working on it