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yo this is stupod virgil is meant to talk in a silent calm intellectual tone not like a fucjer swearing
damn this story had potential but shit virgil is dissapointing dere were many ways but he just had to be a maniac and for the smartest man alive he can’t handle a situation well and wat he did to starlight was just stupid i would have preferred him to hide his claws and show it later than being an asshole from the start
tbh the author didn’t do this well even tho he is a fucking maniac he is meant to appear as the only good guy in the seven until you know the boys try recruiting heroes into fighting against bought then he shows his true colors msking it unexpected
oi i agree the superhero name is shit just imagine if someone says deva is coming to save u doeasnt click at all use something more superheroes u got paragon as that person mentioned
yh author lemme tell u didn’t do this well thinker dats bullshit he has psychokinesis even though he is secluded he should either be vice captain of the seven out of his choice an a very popular hero with his rare psionic ability people will love him and put him as mysterious powerhouse comparable to homelander
ur writing style is annoying simply write normal like other people use she or he not writing as if ur doing a voice over
author of ur stomped on where to return kamiki to his world u can return him to when sukuna vs gojo in shinjiku and he saves gojo at the last minute before the last slice gonna make it dope instead of this love story i’m reading after spending months in o e piece
my honest reply of this story was it could have been done better messed up every thing
i agree more like destruction beams
i’m sorry but you ain’t portraying batman well tbh batman is a chill guy even wen de justice league and him have different opinions he makes his response sound cool like wen the jl were planning to surrender to the government he just quit the jl nothing much