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Blazzing18
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2024-02-02 13:56

So this book looks pretty good!! I read the description and was really interested in it but there is 1 thing the is bothering me.... It says no system so Y is that?? Y isnt there a system in this book if stuff can come out of nowhere 1 day and all that?? Thats what i got out of the description.... it just seems weird if this book has stuff going on in it and no system!!! I think a system should be in this book just from reading the description but thats just my opinion!!

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Hm... if you asking me why there is no system. Well originally there is. But I changed it to a simple superpower(hence the creation part. It doesnt imply system, just a superpower). Perhaps the next book I write i make a system.

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Gabichu_Yeah
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I'm going to be honest, this is horrible, the MC acts as if he were the harem protagonist of an anime where all the women fall in love with him for small actions (obviously we all know that those very specific occasions are done by the author) which makes everything artificial and of low quality. The MC's way of speaking and the rough and unfluent writing style remind me a lot of novels translated from Chinese to English, he makes quite a few references to Chinese culture which is suspicious, an example was when he talked about how he thought he was born from a rock like "Monkey King", obviously talking about chinese legend Sun Wukong, There are more examples like this but it is not necessary to name them all. In general it's like watching/reading about Sims NPCs, They interact in a very artificial way and it feels like they are robots talking to each other faking emotions, I don't know if this is the author's first work but he should at least read other stories and compare them with his to see the big mistakes that exist throughout the novel. Honestly this deserves 2.6 stars, zero writing quality, update rate 5 stars, development 1 star, character design 1 star acts very artificial, world background 5 stars, I love zombies. I will give 4 stars only because there are many chapters and this can be used to pass the time but not to enjoy something of average quality, because let's be honest, this is not of average quality. Now, I asked myself, why are all the novels on webnovel of such poor quality? Even the fanfics are much better written and written, It will always be a mystery to me.

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