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IPIAuthor1yr
2023-08-29 05:49

Decided to draw a rough map on where everything is. I don't recommend taking the scale of things literally. Its more of where everything is at rather than how far they are. The comments in this post are the other three photo of the map I drew that you might wanted to check if you want to visualize it.

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IPIAuthor

The city layout

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First floor of the house

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2nd floor

Daoistwaterdrop
DaoistwaterdropLv14

Thks for the visuals

Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

No repitas tanto el nombre del MC, es molesto y está mal.

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IPIAuthor

Huh? What?

Santy_Melay:No repitas tanto el nombre del MC, es molesto y está mal.
kaval187
kaval187Lv4

looks like a suburbs with a u-shape grid in the well off section instead of all boxed in grid's (the single u-shaped grid in a box grid suburbs are typically deemed as more well-off or more in debt then others)

IFuckedJadeBeauty
IFuckedJadeBeautyLv13

IPI:The city layout
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khazar
khazarLv5

cave man painting is what this is actually no they look more readable [img=sad]

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IPIAuthor

Sadge

khazar:cave man painting is what this is actually no they look more readable [img=sad]
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SuSunnyGoldenLight
SuSunnyGoldenLightLv5

2nd floor

SuSunnyGoldenLight
SuSunnyGoldenLightLv5

1st floor

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IPI
IPIAuthor

very well made. This is great.

SuSunnyGoldenLight:
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Platypus_Perry_
Platypus_Perry_Lv15

He’s saying don’t repeat the name of the mc, it’s annoying and it looks bad.

IPI:Huh? What?
Spirit_Immortal
Spirit_ImmortalLv4

bro I like big harem .....so how big this harem will be

IPI:very well made. This is great.
IPI
IPIAuthor

so far ten planned. I think I probably wont go beyond that either.

Spirit_Immortal:bro I like big harem .....so how big this harem will be
Other Reviews
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I'm going to be honest, this is horrible, the MC acts as if he were the harem protagonist of an anime where all the women fall in love with him for small actions (obviously we all know that those very specific occasions are done by the author) which makes everything artificial and of low quality. The MC's way of speaking and the rough and unfluent writing style remind me a lot of novels translated from Chinese to English, he makes quite a few references to Chinese culture which is suspicious, an example was when he talked about how he thought he was born from a rock like "Monkey King", obviously talking about chinese legend Sun Wukong, There are more examples like this but it is not necessary to name them all. In general it's like watching/reading about Sims NPCs, They interact in a very artificial way and it feels like they are robots talking to each other faking emotions, I don't know if this is the author's first work but he should at least read other stories and compare them with his to see the big mistakes that exist throughout the novel. Honestly this deserves 2.6 stars, zero writing quality, update rate 5 stars, development 1 star, character design 1 star acts very artificial, world background 5 stars, I love zombies. I will give 4 stars only because there are many chapters and this can be used to pass the time but not to enjoy something of average quality, because let's be honest, this is not of average quality. Now, I asked myself, why are all the novels on webnovel of such poor quality? Even the fanfics are much better written and written, It will always be a mystery to me.

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