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Kilam_Laed
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2023-08-31 15:11

the only bad thing is... the setting is in china... dude all chinese name is hard to remember... their name just like and almost same with other people...

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Unfortunately that the setting with the book. Didn't want to do the U.S. as it felt a little hard to manage the pace. Especially how prevalence gun culture is in the U.S. Anyone with a gun could kill anyone else in an apocalypse scenario. I think in the apocalypse, being in the U.S mean zombies are not the worst enemy. Stranger and people are much more dangerous. Maybe next time when I decided to write another book as I get more experience. I will try my best to use more visible names that are distinct for different character for the chinese names.

Seraphim_Sama
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Seraphim_Sama:
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Seraphim_Sama
Seraphim_SamaLv11

Really? Ahg -.- everything is forbidden

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IPIAuthor

Yep, nothing much I can do. I can't even delete it or pin it or anything to it. You can try to delete it and see if you can repost it without the word. That would prove it. Smh word censor-ship, guess webnovel is still qidian.

Seraphim_Sama:Really? Ahg -.- everything is forbidden
Seraphim_Sama
Seraphim_SamaLv11

i will try to do it again

IPI:Yep, nothing much I can do. I can't even delete it or pin it or anything to it. You can try to delete it and see if you can repost it without the word. That would prove it. Smh word censor-ship, guess webnovel is still qidian.
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