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Seraphim_Sama
Seraphim_SamaLv111yr
2023-09-06 12:52

Edition. I read the first chapter and I will give my review that I rarely give. It has a lot of potential, readable and all, the only thing that bothers a bit is that sometimes I feel like you are confusing Xiaoyun with Yunyun, but from the flow of the paragraph it is understandable. But you have to put a little more attention to that part. I'm a fan of the harem, but with coherency. I see this one as having a lot of potential in that even though it's in###t, it makes for something worth watching (since it's obviously fictional). I'll keep reading and try to give another review if I don't forget, keep up the good work author.

Zombie Apocalypse: Creation

IPI
4.7
469 Chs

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IPIAuthor

Wow now it worked. Who would of thought. Crazy!

1yr
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Seraphim_Sama
Seraphim_SamaLv11

I already saw, how delicate they came out on this page, where is the free expression?

IPI:Wow now it worked. Who would of thought. Crazy!
1yr
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IPI
IPIAuthor

Probably just an auto trigger word.(No need for manual review, just automatic) Probably all book review aren't allow to have certain words like those. Because in the book its fine to use I think. Just review is banned since reviews don't have you know, age limitation to look at (Book has restricted/18+ tags, but review doesn't). Maybe comment has this too. I haven't tested that.

Seraphim_Sama:I already saw, how delicate they came out on this page, where is the free expression?
1yr
3
SuSunnyGoldenLight
SuSunnyGoldenLightLv4

MC is 晓云 xiǎo yún (daybreak cloud or Akatsuki)His twin sister is 霄云 xiāo yún (Heavenly cloud )??

11mth
1
IPI
IPIAuthor

Nah, initially, it was just 晓云(male) and 晓芸(female). Just a grass radical on top. Now I have edited it to be Xiaoyue for the female one to reduce name confusion due to its similarity with Yunyun and Yanyan(晓月), which is going to be implemented over the winter break (during December-January)

SuSunnyGoldenLight:MC is 晓云 xiǎo yún (daybreak cloud or Akatsuki)His twin sister is 霄云 xiāo yún (Heavenly cloud )??
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IPIAuthor

Decided to draw a rough map on where everything is. I don't recommend taking the scale of things literally. Its more of where everything is at rather than how far they are. The comments in this post are the other three photo of the map I drew that you might wanted to check if you want to visualize it.

1yr

IPI
IPIAuthor

Hello everyone. This is the author's shameless review of the book so far. If you have any questions, leave them here. This will serve as a Q&A.

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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I'm going to be honest, this is horrible, the MC acts as if he were the harem protagonist of an anime where all the women fall in love with him for small actions (obviously we all know that those very specific occasions are done by the author) which makes everything artificial and of low quality. The MC's way of speaking and the rough and unfluent writing style remind me a lot of novels translated from Chinese to English, he makes quite a few references to Chinese culture which is suspicious, an example was when he talked about how he thought he was born from a rock like "Monkey King", obviously talking about chinese legend Sun Wukong, There are more examples like this but it is not necessary to name them all. In general it's like watching/reading about Sims NPCs, They interact in a very artificial way and it feels like they are robots talking to each other faking emotions, I don't know if this is the author's first work but he should at least read other stories and compare them with his to see the big mistakes that exist throughout the novel. Honestly this deserves 2.6 stars, zero writing quality, update rate 5 stars, development 1 star, character design 1 star acts very artificial, world background 5 stars, I love zombies. I will give 4 stars only because there are many chapters and this can be used to pass the time but not to enjoy something of average quality, because let's be honest, this is not of average quality. Now, I asked myself, why are all the novels on webnovel of such poor quality? Even the fanfics are much better written and written, It will always be a mystery to me.

1yr
Kilam_Laed
Kilam_LaedLv4

the only bad thing is... the setting is in china... dude all chinese name is hard to remember... their name just like and almost same with other people...

1yr
Daoistwaterdrop
DaoistwaterdropLv14

It’s been a while since an apocalypse book has gained my interest like this one has. The author has created an interesting world with a interesting mc, the grammar although average at the beginning gets better overtime and the author is consistent with updates. Highly recommend to any prospective readers. And author keep up the good work.

1yr
Mad_Max_1022
Mad_Max_1022Lv1

Well written story with an apocalypse setting, likable characters and a little mystery. I hope the MC matures with the difficult circumstances and becomes more domineering and decisive so he can protect his family. keep up the good work author

1yr
Dragon_FRUITs
Dragon_FRUITsLv2

Wow this story chapter is so long, and it is straight Hantai, and I see no Apocalypse's in the first few chapters.

27d
Austin_Fundador
Austin_FundadorLv1

Not bad not bad you guys should give this a try

2mth
Nadare17
Nadare17Lv4

interesting synopsis [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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