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2024-07-13 15:07

Hello everyone. This is the author's shameless review of the book so far. If you have any questions, leave them here. This will serve as a Q&A.

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druidfungus
druidfungusLv14

so it is a harem right? are all the leads in the character spoil his women? just wondering.

druidfungus
druidfungusLv14

im still going to read it to learn how everyone gets together.

druidfungus:so it is a harem right? are all the leads in the character spoil his women? just wondering.
IPI
IPIAuthor

it is a harem. yes the mc get all of the lead character listed in the character info

druidfungus:so it is a harem right? are all the leads in the character spoil his women? just wondering.
Scy7he
Scy7heLv3

(commenting after ch 87) why is mc being shown to be a sorry excuse of a yes man? his relation with his lovers feels really toxic, where the girls just boss him around, and mc just accepts all their bs while looking pathetic I wouldn't feel this annoyed usually, but mc's relation with his girls feels really unhealthy.

IPI
IPIAuthor

he felt partially indebt because they grew up without a father because of him. He felt indebt because he's the person who has put them in a situation where they have to share him. Think of it just as someone who feel he need to pay back those debt. One aay or another.

Scy7he:(commenting after ch 87) why is mc being shown to be a sorry excuse of a yes man? his relation with his lovers feels really toxic, where the girls just boss him around, and mc just accepts all their bs while looking pathetic I wouldn't feel this annoyed usually, but mc's relation with his girls feels really unhealthy.
IPI
IPIAuthor

(And this book is going under revamp. Currently, I'm almost finished with volume two. It's still a long way to go before I can finish editing the older chapters that I'm unsatisfied with. (The edited as of is the indication in the author's note of each chapter.)

Scy7he:(commenting after ch 87) why is mc being shown to be a sorry excuse of a yes man? his relation with his lovers feels really toxic, where the girls just boss him around, and mc just accepts all their bs while looking pathetic I wouldn't feel this annoyed usually, but mc's relation with his girls feels really unhealthy.
Scy7he
Scy7heLv3

I think the (edited) should be put on the chapter title it being on authors note makes it many many times more likely to be unnoticed... I didn't notice it a single time reading 100+ chapters ngl 😅

IPI:(And this book is going under revamp. Currently, I'm almost finished with volume two. It's still a long way to go before I can finish editing the older chapters that I'm unsatisfied with. (The edited as of is the indication in the author's note of each chapter.)
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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

I'm going to be honest, this is horrible, the MC acts as if he were the harem protagonist of an anime where all the women fall in love with him for small actions (obviously we all know that those very specific occasions are done by the author) which makes everything artificial and of low quality. The MC's way of speaking and the rough and unfluent writing style remind me a lot of novels translated from Chinese to English, he makes quite a few references to Chinese culture which is suspicious, an example was when he talked about how he thought he was born from a rock like "Monkey King", obviously talking about chinese legend Sun Wukong, There are more examples like this but it is not necessary to name them all. In general it's like watching/reading about Sims NPCs, They interact in a very artificial way and it feels like they are robots talking to each other faking emotions, I don't know if this is the author's first work but he should at least read other stories and compare them with his to see the big mistakes that exist throughout the novel. Honestly this deserves 2.6 stars, zero writing quality, update rate 5 stars, development 1 star, character design 1 star acts very artificial, world background 5 stars, I love zombies. I will give 4 stars only because there are many chapters and this can be used to pass the time but not to enjoy something of average quality, because let's be honest, this is not of average quality. Now, I asked myself, why are all the novels on webnovel of such poor quality? Even the fanfics are much better written and written, It will always be a mystery to me.

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