Santy_Melay

We're off to a bad start, the guy who wrote this has no fucking clue about Japanese culture, no one calls other people "Kuhai" like their counterpart "Senpai", but hey, I'm not going to read shit like this.

Boring novel, the characters are annoying, especially Kushina, the plot moves at 2 km/h, it's boring. And the beginning is shit, I don't know what authors have with complex beginnings, furthermore, it is absurd that they let the protagonist live, he was a spy, who killed Konoha ninjas, even if he lost his memory, I would have killed him.

The authors who write these disgusting things must have great mental problems, I mean, making such a disgusting protagonist must reflect the author's desires.

The novel is not good, it had potential but the author screwed up with all that talk about his influence, it is annoying and it makes no sense for others to treat him as if he were someone very influential when there is no reason for them to do so, yes, he is a genius, but they make him look like he was from another world, they didn't even treat Harry Potter that way. The novel is boring, it repeats the same thing all the time, that if your reputation, influence, politics, uncontrolled power, that others warn you that there are people who do not see you with good eyes; This is said over and over again, which makes it repetitive and annoying.

Honestly, the guy below is right, the protagonist is pathetic, he also talks about love but he started chasing girls not for love but because they are anime characters, which is quite hypocritical. It is also said that the protagonist has high emotional intelligence but does not realize that Kaguya is in love with him, also that he is observant but does not notice her change in hairstyle.

How annoying is this novel, because shit it has to repeat over and over again things that are already known or that have already been mentioned, the author who wrote this is an idiot.

You're an idiot too, labels exist for a reason.

It's one thing to not be able to please everyone and another to not want to learn and be a shitty author who doesn't seem to know how to write a story, because a decent author knows perfectly well that the main arcs are the ones that should be developed in detail, not the filler ones.

The novel is very bad, to begin with, the author puts the first person between ", and the dialogues between '. Furthermore, the protagonist is pathetic, he had an erection just from having contact with a woman, not even a normal virgin would do that to him, and the worst thing is that he blames it on his adolescent body, it is pathetic. And finally, the protagonist acts like a teenager when he is supposed to be mentally an adult. And how unbearable Tori can be, she previously said that she wanted to get closer to the protagonist but her attitude shows the opposite, and no one in their right mind would continue dating her because of how she made fun of the protagonist.

Another idiot who gets upset because someone gives a bad review, justifying that it is bad for the novel and that there is little empathy for the author. This section is for giving criticism, especially personal, since 90% of the criticism is personal, almost no one is objective, and that is fine, because that means that people with the same tastes as you do not read it, and if you do not have the same tastes then nothing prevents you from reading it.