Honestly the story is using complicated words and extra description way to much for no reason. It’s like the author is trying to compensate for the lack of a good storyline and the cliches that come with it.
I disagree. This story is one of the best I've read in years.
Cat_TipLv14
It okay I gave it a try but for webnovel it’s too tier in terms of writing quality
Sil3nt_1:I disagree. This story is one of the best I've read in years.
TsukuyoomiiLv15
It’s a really good novel bro, you should really read it
Cat_Tip:It okay I gave it a try but for webnovel it’s too tier in terms of writing quality
novelmeisterLv15
I wholeheartedly agree with your review. After reading the first twenty chapters, the main character is given a confusing introduction lacking depth of his original life (like his mother, who was his only relative, was not introduced, despite him claiming to be family-first.) He also gets foreshadowed as a transcendent being, leaving the reader lacking in imagination for what’s to come. While this is the authors first series, there are too many errors that make this series uncomfortable to read at times. I would give it an overall rating of 3 stars.
PrimasLv4
I was thinking the same thing
novelmeister:I wholeheartedly agree with your review. After reading the first twenty chapters, the main character is given a confusing introduction lacking depth of his original life (like his mother, who was his only relative, was not introduced, despite him claiming to be family-first.) He also gets foreshadowed as a transcendent being, leaving the reader lacking in imagination for what’s to come. While this is the authors first series, there are too many errors that make this series uncomfortable to read at times. I would give it an overall rating of 3 stars.
ThiaanLv13
I hear what you are saying. I really do and some parts are really confusing. But this story is really really good. The author is not shoving fillers down my throat and the story keeps on progressing. sometimes fast other times slow but a really good read. One of the the best. currently in my top 2. love this novel. I have lost sleep because of this novel.
novelmeister:I wholeheartedly agree with your review. After reading the first twenty chapters, the main character is given a confusing introduction lacking depth of his original life (like his mother, who was his only relative, was not introduced, despite him claiming to be family-first.) He also gets foreshadowed as a transcendent being, leaving the reader lacking in imagination for what’s to come. While this is the authors first series, there are too many errors that make this series uncomfortable to read at times. I would give it an overall rating of 3 stars.
NYX531Lv13
I'm in ch 150+ and it's full of fillers and in academy arc the author introduced a lot of new names which is confusing.And it feels like he is nerfed
LxncxlxtLv4
nahhhhh you tripping.... 🤣🤣🤣
Sil3nt_1:I disagree. This story is one of the best I've read in years.
TRANSCENDENCE_Lv12
Have you read past chapter 500? This book deserves its rank
Cat_TipLv14
If I didn’t enjoy the first I don’t know 20 chapters why would I pay to read more?
TRANSCENDENCE_:Have you read past chapter 500? This book deserves its rank
Nishad_ShegokarLv1
Mc is vergil and Ravenstien Family is almost similar to Zieghart family. I tried to bear with it too but the more I read, the absurd it get
Sil3nt_1:I disagree. This story is one of the best I've read in years.
