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maximum number of people cannot defeated this move

your story a lots of potential but if you use that story in a good way you are not even making your words in a right way whatever you are using is not doing it's job and you are skipping many things many time ok don't skip the timeline you should be able to add something in that line some sentences some word so we can know what he was doing at that are to make your story even bigger ad something like while he was doing some kind of incident happened that's why he gain some kind of power by giving a logical choices just like and interferes of a God but he is interfering in his own life you will not understand what I am trying to say so he can become what will become God the most powerful to me for that he need some kind of help and he can do the help for get the help on his own the plot is that he is helping his own just starting stages the wou ldhave been a good story but this kind of story is never return or if somebody does try that they just f*** up in the middle and leave the story because they can't think anything because I have read some similar story

her not him for the first one

I think author was trying to write it as a 16 inches if not then this is average it's just above average a little bit I'm not even joking if you are a man then then you would know I am not saying as a man or I am saying if you are m-a-n

are you talking about their power in their brace level or just their power level because they can raise their power level while fighting just like Goku did and their men techniques to raise he is your her power level to that of a God I mean to say they are some techniques from which he can gain the power level similar to a God but not fully that's what I am trying to say

he in place of they

please use your AI properly because in place of the day should be him or he not they are there

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maximum of your words does not even make sense it is a good story if you decrease the sexual value because maximum of the stories on this site are on based on that there is no problem but the way you are writing it leaving so many space it's like a plot whole your creating a purpose but I don't know what your reason is please fix it if you want to write a good story that is because it has a potential you can use that to make her regret and love him by doing many things and one more thing please you some kind of AI if you can't think long words then you your brain in something because if you are able to write things this much then you should be able to see the problems in ai because with this help you will be able to write at least some good stories because you are not focusing on the story or it this is even your story or not I don't even know because I have that so many stories from same fiction net and this web novel site by maximum of the patriot occurs are just comes stealing stories from fanfiction.net and many other websites like ao3

that to i forgot about that thanks