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now I think you don't know anything about Ben 10 at this point , Spidermonkey can only shoot webs through his tail, not from any other part of his body even the ultimate version shoot through his mouth how can you mess this up man that is classic knowledge those who have seen alien force.

it does the opposite it gives the order of death the common people it just passes dead penalty to the common people because common people live does not matter it never does and one more thing it is because it's a novel comic book if this was a real everybody every single so alone earth would have hated the bad f****** man no killing rule is good but there are some like his obsessive boyfriend joker and people like him they are beyond redemption they do not get that okay they the die or get better or understand that they did something foolish idiotic that's all at they try to change themselves which is not possible because we all know who he is every other criminal just like him or more powerful than him or who's mind has been broken beyond repair and is pure evil I would like to say more things and please don't say that I have never Read comics books I did but think it clearly normal peoples are common people live does not matter in the stories

that's an idiotic mindset everything should be equal just one thing should be able and that is that is dex and agi and there is magic then it should be in between those to because if we can use some kind of blending skill that will be good shadow blending or something related to darkness or anything aur just teleportation.

Rubing her hand

only one person cannot heal in that situation is Anna Maria and mabe yuki tsukomi but she can just use her reverse technique to heal everything but I don't know about the gravity 20x gravity .

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the best line for this will be Bossu saaave meeeeee because he is a child right now and she is in this version of Ben 10 she should call it like you are cute way will be fun for your story too

he is having this life.

there is something missing in your story I don't know what it is like you did not put something like you could have done something more and his power good but he should have some kind of tragic incident that way it will really look good for your story I mean yes he became a demmy god demigod power levels is good because human can have that much power through some kind of help but to be came a God he cannot just use some kind of skill and take the thing or make himself fully God and the situation about his money I know that Tom has lots and lots of gold in that what the thing is he is throwing money like it doesn't matter to him and I know it really does not but and he lives I know it's a really small amount but still I should think before that at and that ice cream man got them real gold coin would you have thought before doing anything like he could ask Steve to pay for that and there are many more thing like just your story really good in it is addictive but I was expecting more because you are story is really good and I am saying it again your story is really good but there should be some more line in between some of them and you should think before doing anything more thing I should add if he really he is God shouldn't he have some kind of like blessing the chicken give minor to advanced level one that way he can choose other people to fight for him in war it can be entertainment for him