Thiaan

The story is really good. And I do enjoy reading this novel. but the author keeps on blue balling cliffhanger after cliffhanger and it gets too much. Every second page is a cliffhanger. And they are really short. If you compare them to writers like Hatefull_Fellow this is but one paragraph. The story is really slow. And there is also alot of fillers. I still give it a high rating as the points I listed here does not have a ranking system. I would not recommend buying privilege because of all the blue balling.

I'm not crying. you are!

The obsidian order are like the main group of bad guys.

With the amount of milking happening here we should have a full fledged dairy farm at this point.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Feels like al I do is complain. The chapters aren't releasing at their normal time. The amount of chapters being released is reducing. And the details keeps on getting more and more. I don't need to know about oxygen and hydrogen. He should've just came in and done it. He has a talents and a bloodline that's the best the human domain has ever seen. He is like in his 30 already. Ego is not a thing that he should be worried about. His life is on the line. and we are talking about 02. Please pick up the pace. At this rate the nexus is only going to happen in after 200 pages.

One chapter again? What's going on?

With what was said on the very first page of this. I do think that it's going to be a combination of all his elements. I also do feel like the novel is slowing down. And the archs being a tad bit boring. So we might have to wait longer then required.

How can it take so long to close up loose ends. It's honestly not worth the money I have to spend for these short chapters and long goodbyes. Can we get some progress in the story and not long goodbyes. I get that you need some fillers but this is honestly to much. Atticus will only start training in 10+ pages. He probably will have to say goodbye to his mom and dad aswell.

I hear what you are saying. I really do and some parts are really confusing. But this story is really really good. The author is not shoving fillers down my throat and the story keeps on progressing. sometimes fast other times slow but a really good read. One of the the best. currently in my top 2. love this novel. I have lost sleep because of this novel.