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Author here, hope you enjoy my work. I had a hard time conveying emotions through dialogues and portraying certain situations at times but all I can do is hope I get better over time. Feel free to comment over it(you can also criticize as you like). (~ ̄▽ ̄)~
Good chapter, The emotions hit pretty hard in this one.
Geiger counter is a device that is not known by a lot of people, it would help if you put in the usage or at least why he was relieved to get that reading on that device.
I just can't shake the feeling of how much the author is using chatgpt to fill up the chapters and still one of the chapters is entirely about how hewalks in and everyone is surprised. The glazing is on a level where even if I like a character, I just cringe out over the entire paragraph about how white his hairs are. Also, at times, he characters just feel empty. The author explains every other thing and glazes the characters by himself which makes it feel like he's just trying to make them seem a certain way rather than explaining that through a background character or the mc. Mc saying he's a family-first guy and then calling his mother "accursed woman", "overprotective woman" and some other shi is just diabolical. He's shown as this super calculative and patient guy and then curses around without holding back even though he knows someone is watching him. He does weight training when he is like 5-years old. His grandpa doesn't hate his dad but slaps him hard enough to get injured when his uncle dies. It's like a bunch of series being weaved into this one thread of wire and then coating it with chatgpt like plastic. The author has a bunch of potential when it comes to world building and plot but when it comes to characters, he just patches that hole up by saying they are buncha powerful. All in all, it is like straight up brainrot. If you haven't read tha much manhwa or manga or ln or webnovel, this might seem like it deserves it's place. Otherwise, it just feels like rereading everything once again with just more sensory details and mind boggling glazing on the top. If you have time to waste and just wanna numb your brain, this might be it for you.
Author here, we are already 5 chapters in and I'm still writing the next ones. From here on, things will get fast and the chapters will be longer so you can have a feast. Peace out.✌️
Mc is vergil and Ravenstien Family is almost similar to Zieghart family. I tried to bear with it too but the more I read, the absurd it get