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HeroOfWroughtIron
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2024-03-14 11:45

Story is definitely good and one of the few good Fate stories out there. It’s also very detailed and imaginative when I say that I mean like dragon ball kind of detail which I really like. Although I’ve noticed some very small minor mistakes when it comes to certain words and descriptions but that’s alright since those are just small things that can always be fixed via para comment. I also have to give some appreciation to author for how well developed he made Godrick with his origin story. I look forward to future chapters and eventually its completion hopefully.

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Greenbaypitbull
GreenbaypitbullAuthor

thank you so much!!! I really appreciate your review! I try my best to catch the spelling errors and other mistakes, but I get so excited about posting, and rush through my reading!thank you so much for your review!

HeroOfWroughtIron
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It’s ok man I know that feeling when I used to write I would always be excited to post instead of just checking over my chapter.

Greenbaypitbull:thank you so much!!! I really appreciate your review! I try my best to catch the spelling errors and other mistakes, but I get so excited about posting, and rush through my reading!thank you so much for your review!
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Greenbaypitbull
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hello everyone! it's been a blast writing this novel, and I'm so thankful to everyone who reads it! a couple of things before you get into it.I am a brand new author who has never written anything, so please be patient with me! Another really big thing is that some aspects of my story differ from cannon. an example of this is that the knight's of the round table are weaker in the first part of the story (meaning the prologue set in ancient Britain.) so please don't be shocked if the characters seem weaker then they should be.the reason for this, is I didn't fully understand just how strong they were in life while I was writing it, so by the time I learned about it, I was already well into the story! another aspect of cannon that I've changed is that I'm combining most of the timelines into one. meaning that MC (Who is a Heroic Spirit) will participate in many of the Holy Grail Wars. (Ubw, Apocrypha, Grand Order, ect, ect) The third aspect I've changed is that I've made Alaya a little more "powerful" than her cannon counterpart. I understand that this might upset some readers, but I promise that it has a purpose. there are other things as well, but I hope that you give this novel a chance! I try and answer all the questions I can, so please feel free to ask questions or voice your concerns in the comments. I will try my best to answer them!again, I hope you give this novel a chance, but please remember that this book might not be for everyone, and that ok!I appreciate each and every single one of you!

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