Greenbaypitbull

if im being honest, it kinda slipped my mind that there would be extra armor in the battle barge, and i needed them to get to Mandalore

i thought it was an adamantium core mixed with carbon steel... if what you say is true, and it's complete adamantium, then yes, you would be right.

i understand that, but im always looking to improve my writing. I've already brought in aspects of Legends with Abaloth, and i was already thinking of some ways to make the Jedi more powerful in the future. this is just one way I've been thinking. Im not saying that im going to change how im writing, im just saying that in the future, im going to keep these things in mind.

alright, i just read the wiki about it, and i was reading the "canon" version, which is just the seeing major events ability. there is also the "legends" version, which is what you are talking about, so i will incorporate that when writing scenes in the future.

I can understand your frustrations with that scene, and i must admit, i think i will go back and rewrite it in the future because i do think they would have put up more of a fight than that. your point about Mace Windu seeing shatterpoints is a bit confusing. to my understanding, it just lets him see moments in time that have a significant impact on history, so im not sure how that would help him? i think one of the biggest "shatterpoints" is when he gets his hand cut off, and Anakin because Palpatine’s apprentice. That's a pretty big moment, yet he still got beaten?

that's completely true, but Astartes are super soldiers. i dont think they would stumble around after getting shot. however, i do see your point about being shot multiple times. i can't remember if that's happened to one of my main characters, but if so, I'll be sure to write those scenes better in the future.

and you make a good point about the blaster fire, but I've already stated that i feel like the armor the Astartes are wearing is compatible with Beskar... ever watch the Mandalorian??? blaster bolts bounce off him all the time

did you miss the part where Palpatine masked the killing intent? He masked Sebastian’s intention so that Plagueis wouldn't recognize it... That's why i feel like you are just skimming through everything? i completely agree with you that someone like Plagueis would absolutely recognize the killing intent, UNLESS it was masked from him, which is what Palpatine did

damn bro, did i freakin leak my notes or something?😂

sure👍