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FransizSef
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2023-10-11 02:12

So far really great. Weird to see only ONE review but i can understand so far I'm believing we just read prolong but still better than ` of fate ff already. No harem pls it doesn't even feel like it can handle romance. Yeah make him have daddy problems lolI got few questions tho, i don't believe he is dead since Vivian spell also with him somewhat gaining his supposed powers but it's pretty good way to kill him off too. Perhaps you're gonna say with Vivian's spell he managed to be juggernaut heroic sprit and it makes sense? not much but understandable nonetheless. Is he gonna be in FGO or FSN that's my main question right now. I don't feel like putting him in FSN is that great of idea even apo or whatever it is better fit than fsn. Still acceptable i just would like to see him in Camelot singularity :)

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Greenbaypitbull
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I really appreciate the review! in the next chapter (chapter 11), I'll hopefully explain everything that's happened and drop some teasers for what's going to happen. I do want to say, however, that this will have an aspect of romance, but no harem for what I have planned. thanks again for the review!!!

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Greenbaypitbull
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hello everyone! it's been a blast writing this novel, and I'm so thankful to everyone who reads it! a couple of things before you get into it.I am a brand new author who has never written anything, so please be patient with me! Another really big thing is that some aspects of my story differ from cannon. an example of this is that the knight's of the round table are weaker in the first part of the story (meaning the prologue set in ancient Britain.) so please don't be shocked if the characters seem weaker then they should be.the reason for this, is I didn't fully understand just how strong they were in life while I was writing it, so by the time I learned about it, I was already well into the story! another aspect of cannon that I've changed is that I'm combining most of the timelines into one. meaning that MC (Who is a Heroic Spirit) will participate in many of the Holy Grail Wars. (Ubw, Apocrypha, Grand Order, ect, ect) The third aspect I've changed is that I've made Alaya a little more "powerful" than her cannon counterpart. I understand that this might upset some readers, but I promise that it has a purpose. there are other things as well, but I hope that you give this novel a chance! I try and answer all the questions I can, so please feel free to ask questions or voice your concerns in the comments. I will try my best to answer them!again, I hope you give this novel a chance, but please remember that this book might not be for everyone, and that ok!I appreciate each and every single one of you!

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