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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv151yr
2023-09-02 07:38

Not to bad a novel, the concept of simulations has been used before but I fear it will limit the story growth overall. The characters are, in my opinion, just very 2 dimensional. Your either good or bad, there is no middle ground. The MC is low key in the beginning, then gets a bit of power and then goes full on nuclear. His attitude to others is merciless, their values are determined by their usefulness to him as tools. He professes his devotion to his loved ones yet i feel it is one of the many masks he wears. Oh and he is a yandere which is introduced early on. I think the book is interesting but so far to me, it just feels like a wish fulfilment novel that the author can let loose with his dark thoughts. I read up to the current chapter before privlage locks, think about chapter 41 odd, and don’t believe this one is for me as I don’t believe a book focussed solely on world simulations has a great life expectancy. If he was a bit more invested with the real world then maybe, but in the 40 odd chapters, he has only stepped outside his house once and even then, with his powers he couldnt be bothered to save a girl who was fighting to save others, knowing she was insufficient for the task. He just turned away and left the scene, that really was the final nail. Many ways the author could have turned this narrative around, such as disguised himself and intervened to test his new powers etc, but no, he just couldn’t be bothered and coldly dismissed her. Anyways Tl;dr. Just a dark book with little redeeming qualities at this stage of development.

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Exophone_098
Exophone_098Lv13

My friend small question will you try to help some people who are in a lurch due to somebody while knowing that you could get into trouble with those people or the police. This is how life works.I understand something could have been done there, but life isn't fair.As you have read those chapters so you should know that he was right about getting into trouble with them

HollowEmbers
HollowEmbersLv4

bro mc's personality is contradictory, he says he won't slaughter innocents yet does so anyway in the previous world and in the same world. and for some reason he became a male yandere so yikes

Exophone_098:My friend small question will you try to help some people who are in a lurch due to somebody while knowing that you could get into trouble with those people or the police. This is how life works.I understand something could have been done there, but life isn't fair.As you have read those chapters so you should know that he was right about getting into trouble with them
Tunde_Musa
Tunde_MusaLv4

lol give me them powers and i'mma go around slaying any evil I see yeah am that righteous

SliverFang
SliverFangLv13

That trouble is in his head. His strength gets revealed soon after and nothing troublesome happens. He openly threatens others in the organization and they shrug it off. So his "cautious" nature isn't warranted, it's just an excuse for being an awful person.

Exophone_098:My friend small question will you try to help some people who are in a lurch due to somebody while knowing that you could get into trouble with those people or the police. This is how life works.I understand something could have been done there, but life isn't fair.As you have read those chapters so you should know that he was right about getting into trouble with them
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