Alanray64
Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”
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Alanray6410h agoReplied to JJ0007Agreed 100% 👍
- Alanray6414h agoCommented
Minimise the number of author comments like this, so far every chapter. There is a dedicated author notes section that this can reside in rather than boosting word count.
- Alanray6419h agoCommented
Lysandra hasn’t got a telephathic link, the first two girls only. Author mistake or did author mean on of the other girls instead.
- Alanray6421h agoCommented
Isn’t the room soundproofed?
- Alanray64a day agoCommented
Why are high elves counted alongside the monster race? In 99% of books, elves stand along side humans, dwarves etc?
- Alanray642d agoCommented
- Alanray642d agoCommented
To many author notes.. give it a rest, if desperate then maybe every dozen chapters.
- Alanray642d agoCommented
Probably better saying .. clattered against … shattered means broken. So lots of potion going no where.
- Alanray642d agoReplied to meliodaswrath
Did he actually go there? Damn
- Alanray642d agoCommented
Chopsticks? I’m seeing this more and more in western novels. Whatever happened to the good old knife and fork?
