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XxBadWoolfxX
XxBadWoolfxXLv11yr
2023-10-08 13:09

The MC is just an annoying guy, he keeps saying he's paranoid and everything but he gets the slightest bit of power and is lost. The writing, despite not having many spelling errors, is by no means succinct, something that the author could explain in two sentences takes almost the entire chapter, making it full of endless monologues, as if he were explaining it to a 5-year-old child. what he's been doing for years, in other words, it was easier to just continue the story. I'm not even going to delve into this disgusting being called MC, annoying and irritating hypocrite.

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Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv13

To top it off, he couldn't even help defeat a 7 rank monster when he was 9 rank. I mean, he has Wind manipulation, mind manipulation, and Grandmaster Sword Intent, yet, he couldn't kill off a 7 rank monster and has the gut to say he saw the Octopus monster raping a girl.

Anime_Sama_8317
Anime_Sama_8317Lv3

He did say if he did help her or kill it the world powerhouse will know like the mc is just a selfish person who thinks he’s god (not very much fan of those type of mc atlist not to this level)

Josh_Richie:To top it off, he couldn't even help defeat a 7 rank monster when he was 9 rank. I mean, he has Wind manipulation, mind manipulation, and Grandmaster Sword Intent, yet, he couldn't kill off a 7 rank monster and has the gut to say he saw the Octopus monster raping a girl.
Big_Nigg4
Big_Nigg4Lv4

i don't really mind some gore and heavy content like what happened to the girl but what ticked me off his the hypocrisy and inconsistency of mc when it comes to being selfish and cruel.

Josh_Richie:To top it off, he couldn't even help defeat a 7 rank monster when he was 9 rank. I mean, he has Wind manipulation, mind manipulation, and Grandmaster Sword Intent, yet, he couldn't kill off a 7 rank monster and has the gut to say he saw the Octopus monster raping a girl.
Rosk_Uncot
Rosk_UncotLv3

I'm a fan of Fang Yuan and I tell you that his reason is pure stupidity.

Anime_Sama_8317:He did say if he did help her or kill it the world powerhouse will know like the mc is just a selfish person who thinks he’s god (not very much fan of those type of mc atlist not to this level)
I_Am_Death
I_Am_DeathLv15

with his wind manipulation and mind manipulation superpowers he could have easily helped in secret, especially since his power source (the virus) is a completely new and unknown energy source to the transcendent organisation so they would not even be able to detect it. In conclusion, his decision was dumb

Anime_Sama_8317:He did say if he did help her or kill it the world powerhouse will know like the mc is just a selfish person who thinks he’s god (not very much fan of those type of mc atlist not to this level)
Shredder_
Shredder_Lv4

Exactly I was thinking about that. The concept is good but author drags the monologs way too much

RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

The rationalization of not taking revenge on Sophie for his parent's murder, is mind numbingly bad. MC could kill her without any backlash yet he didn't. Whole thing is forced. Writer might going for super forced drama, water and word count.

Anime_Sama_8317:He did say if he did help her or kill it the world powerhouse will know like the mc is just a selfish person who thinks he’s god (not very much fan of those type of mc atlist not to this level)
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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

Not to bad a novel, the concept of simulations has been used before but I fear it will limit the story growth overall. The characters are, in my opinion, just very 2 dimensional. Your either good or bad, there is no middle ground. The MC is low key in the beginning, then gets a bit of power and then goes full on nuclear. His attitude to others is merciless, their values are determined by their usefulness to him as tools. He professes his devotion to his loved ones yet i feel it is one of the many masks he wears. Oh and he is a yandere which is introduced early on. I think the book is interesting but so far to me, it just feels like a wish fulfilment novel that the author can let loose with his dark thoughts. I read up to the current chapter before privlage locks, think about chapter 41 odd, and don’t believe this one is for me as I don’t believe a book focussed solely on world simulations has a great life expectancy. If he was a bit more invested with the real world then maybe, but in the 40 odd chapters, he has only stepped outside his house once and even then, with his powers he couldnt be bothered to save a girl who was fighting to save others, knowing she was insufficient for the task. He just turned away and left the scene, that really was the final nail. Many ways the author could have turned this narrative around, such as disguised himself and intervened to test his new powers etc, but no, he just couldn’t be bothered and coldly dismissed her. Anyways Tl;dr. Just a dark book with little redeeming qualities at this stage of development.

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