SliverFang

Harry Potter and the Daft Morons on fanfiction.net

"I'm not a hero, but I'm not a villain either" *proceeds to genocide the world for profit* The novel is full of explaining how other people are doing bad things or stupid things or w/e, but the MC is busy finding flimsy excuses why his evil is ok, or why him not stopping evil is actually smart when there's barely anything that actually supports it. There's no justification why MC turned out to be such a shitty person, but I wouldn't have given this story such a low rating if the guy just OWNED UP TO IT. He claims that he won't kill innocents unless they stand in his way, but "his way" is whatever he wants at the moment, whether it's their resources, their treasures, their souls, or their own freedom. Seriously, in the second simulation the chick his dead mom arranged a marriage to wanted to be independent. He wasn't interested in her at all, but because she didn't accept her fate and asked to cancel the arrangement, it meant that she humiliated him and he killed her instantly. "Oh she asks for time to grow stronger to prove herself, but I bet she'd find a lover in that time and I don't want her to NTR me so DIE!" Just pathetic.

That trouble is in his head. His strength gets revealed soon after and nothing troublesome happens. He openly threatens others in the organization and they shrug it off. So his "cautious" nature isn't warranted, it's just an excuse for being an awful person.

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Bah, I really dislike this type of plot. Skimmed through these chapters...

Pointless ultimatums an awful relationship make. And how is forsaking a close friend/family member because he demands it a show of strong will? If he demands pointless sacrifices just to prove they love him, they won't love him for long.

I hope the drama doesn't last long. I get why it's happening, it's a reasonable reaction, but it's not fun to read, at least to me...

Thanks for the chapter, nice battles, but you got messy there. The battle with Electabuzz is interrupted with a section against Raichu that isn't even used later on... Also, Dragon Claw is an odd way to finish this. Charmeleon had activated Blaze there, no? Why not use the boost and do a fire move?

Mai: "You forgot about me!" Me: "Who are you???"

I don't really get the people that are annoyed by this format, saying that it's annoying to read. You read the poster's name, skim over the tags (if it's a new poster), and read the message, and it's barely different than reading any other conversation.